Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn cần tự nhiên hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên nói rõ hơn về tần suất và mục đích đến thư viện, đồng thời tránh dùng cụm từ không chính xác như "in this".

例: Yes, I often go to the library because it is a quiet place where I can focus on reading and studying.

提案: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và sử dụng từ ngữ chính xác hơn. Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như "study on a book". Hãy giải thích thêm lý do hoặc hoạt động cụ thể bạn làm trong thư viện.

例: Usually, I study by reading books and taking notes because it helps me understand the material better without spending money on buying books.

提案: Bạn cần cải thiện sự mạch lạc và ngữ pháp trong câu trả lời. Tránh lặp từ và sử dụng thì quá khứ đơn cho hành động đã xảy ra trong quá khứ. Hãy trả lời rõ ràng về thói quen khi còn nhỏ.

例: Yes, when I was a child, my dad, my brother, and I used to go to the library every Wednesday to read books together.

提案: Câu trả lời không liên quan và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và cấu trúc câu rõ ràng. Hãy đưa ra ý kiến hoặc quan sát của bạn về thói quen của trẻ em Trung Quốc.

例: I think many Chinese kids go to the library, but I am usually very busy with homework and other activities, so I don't have much time to go there.

× I frequently go to the library where I can read and study in this.

✓ I frequently go to the library where I can read and study.

The phrase 'study in this' is incorrect because 'in this' is unnecessary and does not fit the context. The correct expression is simply 'study' without 'in this'.

× When I go to the library, I often study on a book because it's cheaper than buying books.

✓ When I go to the library, I often study from a book because it's cheaper than buying books.

The preposition 'on' is incorrect here. The correct preposition to use with 'study' and 'book' is 'from' to indicate the source of study material.

× Uh, when I was child, I, uh, have, have, have been going to the library Wednesday, my dad and my brother and I was going to the library.

✓ Uh, when I was a child, I used to go to the library on Wednesdays with my dad and my brother.

The phrase 'when I was child' is missing the article 'a' before 'child' (singular noun). Also, 'Wednesday' should be pluralized to 'Wednesdays' to indicate habitual action. The verb tense and structure were corrected to past habitual 'used to go' to fit the context.

× Uh, when I was child, I, uh, have, have, have been going to the library Wednesday, my dad and my brother and I was going to the library.

✓ Uh, when I was a child, I used to go to the library on Wednesdays with my dad and my brother.

The pronoun order 'my dad and my brother and I' is awkward and the verb 'was' does not agree with the plural subject. The corrected sentence uses 'with my dad and my brother' to clarify the companions and corrects verb agreement.

× I don't care Chinese guitar because I very occupied with homework and daylight so I don't have time to catch something.

✓ I don't care about Chinese culture because I am very occupied with homework and daylight, so I don't have time to catch anything.

The phrase 'I don't care Chinese guitar' is incorrect; it should be 'I don't care about Chinese culture' (assuming 'guitar' was a mishearing or typo for 'culture'). Also, 'very occupied' needs the verb 'am' to be correct. 'Catch something' is incorrect; 'catch anything' fits better in negative sentences.