Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to give a clear and concise response with a topic sentence, followed by specific reasons or examples. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

例: Yes, I often go to the library because I enjoy reading storybooks and novels. Additionally, I like to read different articles to improve my knowledge and communicate better with others.

提案: Your answer is short and lacks clarity. Avoid asking questions back to the examiner. Provide a clear topic sentence and add specific details using linking words to make your answer coherent.

例: In the library, I usually read books and study stories. I also take notes to help me remember important information.

提案: Your answer is good but contains some grammatical mistakes. Use correct verb forms and linking words to improve fluency and coherence.

例: Yes, I loved going to the library when I was a kid. I read storybooks and novels, which helped me expand my knowledge because I love reading very much.

提案: Your answer is vague and grammatically incorrect. Try to give a direct answer with supporting details and use linking words to connect your ideas.

例: I'm not sure, but I think many Chinese kids often go to the library because it is a good place to study and learn new things.

× Yes I do like to go to library and I love to study story books and novels, different articles and to explain my knowledge and for having a great knowledge in community to speak it about to develop my knowledge more good and a good way.

✓ Yes, I do like to go to the library and I love to study story books and novels, different articles, and to explain my knowledge and to have great knowledge in the community to talk about it to develop my knowledge better and in a good way.

The phrase 'go to library' is missing the definite article 'the' before 'library'. In English, when referring to a specific place like 'library' in this context, the definite article 'the' is required. Also, 'a great knowledge' should be 'great knowledge' because 'knowledge' is an uncountable noun and does not take 'a'. The sentence also needs commas for clarity and better structure.

× We used to read the books and studying stories. Reading stories. What else you speak?

✓ We used to read books and study stories. Reading stories. What else do you talk about?

After 'used to', the base form of the verb should be used, so 'studying' should be 'study'. Also, 'What else you speak?' is incorrect; it should be 'What else do you talk about?' to form a proper question in English.

× Yes, I love going to the library. When I was a kid I read story books and and novel books and it helped me expanded my knowledge and I love reading so much.

✓ Yes, I loved going to the library. When I was a kid, I read story books and novel books and it helped me expand my knowledge. I love reading so much.

The sentence mixes present and past tense incorrectly. Since the speaker is talking about the past ('when I was a kid'), 'love' should be 'loved'. Also, 'helped me expanded' is incorrect; after 'helped me', the base form 'expand' should be used, not the past tense 'expanded'.

× I'm not sure, but I believe there are many ethnicities go to the library, including Chinese people.

✓ I'm not sure, but I believe many ethnic groups go to the library, including Chinese people.

The word 'ethnicities' is not commonly used to refer to groups of people in this context; 'ethnic groups' is more appropriate. Also, 'there are many ethnicities go' is incorrect; it should be 'many ethnic groups go' without 'there are' because 'go' is the main verb here.