Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to use correct verb forms and avoid unnecessary words. Also, make your answer more natural by using simpler expressions.

例: Yes, I often go to the library when I need to study or do important research.

提案: Your answer is a bit long and has grammatical mistakes. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and correct prepositions. Also, avoid repeating the same idea.

例: I usually study and do research in the library because it provides a peaceful environment where I can focus better than when I study alone at home.

提案: Your answer is clear but can be improved by removing filler words like 'Umm' and using more precise vocabulary. Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas.

例: Yes, I used to go to the library with my classmates when I was a kid, especially before exams or when we needed to do research.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains filler words and awkward phrases. Try to express your opinion clearly and use appropriate vocabulary. Avoid repeating words unnecessarily.

例: I am not sure about Chinese kids, but I believe they often visit libraries with friends and family to improve their reading and research skills.

× Yes, I go to the library when I want to studying or research about something important.

✓ Yes, I go to the library when I want to study or research about something important.

The verb 'want' should be followed by the base form of the verb, not the '-ing' form. Therefore, 'studying' should be corrected to 'study'.

× Typically I study and do many research there because in there I have peaceful area for focusing and studying better in comparison with study alone at home.

✓ Typically I study and do much research there because there I have a peaceful area for focusing and studying better compared to studying alone at home.

The noun 'research' is uncountable, so 'many research' is incorrect; it should be 'much research'. Also, 'peaceful area' needs an article 'a'. The phrase 'in there' is redundant; 'there' suffices. 'In comparison with study alone' should be 'compared to studying alone' for correct form and clarity.

× Yes, I used to go to the library when I was a kid with my classmates. Umm, sometimes when we had exams we went there or maybe for many research.

✓ Yes, I used to go to the library when I was a kid with my classmates. Umm, sometimes when we had exams we went there or maybe for much research.

Again, 'research' is uncountable, so 'many research' is incorrect; it should be 'much research'. The rest of the sentence is correct in past tense.

× Actually I don't know about Chinese case but I think they have access to go to the library UMM with dear friends and family for boost their UMM reading and research.

✓ Actually, I don't know about the Chinese case, but I think they have access to go to the library with dear friends and family to boost their reading and research.

The phrase 'for boost' is incorrect; it should be 'to boost' to express purpose. Also, 'UMM' seems to be a filler and should be removed for clarity. 'Chinese case' needs the definite article 'the'. The sentence is corrected for proper modal verb and preposition usage.