Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Apni answer e kichu grammar error ache, ar sentence gulo onek bar bar hoyeche. Apni chesta korun sentence gulo ke shothik vabe structure korte, ar bar bar word repeat na korte. Apnar uttor ke 3-4 sentence er moddhe shongkhipto rakhun, ar proshner uttor direct din.

例: Yes, I often go to the library because it has a wide variety of books. I am a bookish person and enjoy reading in a quiet place. The library provides a peaceful environment where I can concentrate well.

提案: Apnar uttor bhalo, kintu kichu chhoto grammar error ache, jemon 'understands' er jaygay 'understand' hobe. Apni linking words aro bhalo vabe use korte paren jate uttor ta aro logical hoy. Apni aro kichu specific example dite paren.

例: I usually read books in the library because it is a quiet and comfortable place to concentrate. For example, I especially enjoy reading history books since they help me learn about the past and understand different cultures. Therefore, whenever I visit the library, I always choose a history book because there is a wide selection.

提案: Apnar uttor e onek hesitation ar filler words ache, ja natural sound kore na. Apni chesta korun proshner uttor shothik grammar diye, ar filler words chara bolte. Sentence gulo ke shongkhipto rakhun ar proshner uttor direct din.

例: Yes, when I was a kid, I often went to the library with my mother because I loved reading books. Sometimes, I used to read English books there to improve my language skills.

提案: Apnar uttor e onek hesitation ar grammar error ache. Apni chesta korun proshner uttor shothik grammar ar shobdo diye bolte. Filler words komaben ar sentence gulo ke shongkhipto rakhun. Jodi kono information na thake, seta sohoje bolte paren.

例: I am not sure about Chinese kids, but I think many of them visit libraries to learn about history, especially Chinese history.

× Go to the library because library has a varieties of book collection and am IA bookish person.

✓ I go to the library because the library has a variety of book collections and I am a bookish person.

The word 'varieties' should be 'variety' because 'variety' is used as a singular noun when referring to a range or assortment. Also, 'library' needs the definite article 'the' before it. 'Am IA' is incorrect; it should be 'I am a'. 'Book collection' should be pluralized to 'book collections' to match the context.

× I love to read book and I love to read read books in a quiet place where there is no noise and in library I can read book book.

✓ I love to read books and I love to read books in a quiet place where there is no noise, and in the library I can read books.

The noun 'book' should be plural 'books' when talking about reading in general. The phrase 'in library' needs the definite article 'the' before 'library'. The repetition 'read read' and 'book book' are errors and should be corrected to single words.

× Especially enjoy reading history books since they help me learn about the past and understands different cultures.

✓ I especially enjoy reading history books since they help me learn about the past and understand different cultures.

The verb 'understands' should be 'understand' to agree with the plural subject 'they'. Also, the sentence lacks a subject at the beginning; adding 'I' clarifies the subject.

× When I was a kid, I used to go library because, uh, when I, uh, as a kid, I loved to read books.

✓ When I was a kid, I used to go to the library because, uh, when I was a kid, I loved to read books.

The phrase 'go library' is incorrect; it should be 'go to the library' to use the correct preposition and article. Also, the repetition of 'when I, uh, as a kid' is redundant; 'when I was a kid' suffices.

× So my, uh, with my mom, I often go library because of, uh, the books and uh, uh, sometimes I used to read English.

✓ So, with my mom, I often went to the library because of the books, and sometimes I used to read English.

The phrase 'go library' should be 'go to the library' to use the correct preposition. Also, 'used to' indicates past habit, so 'went' is more appropriate than 'go' here. The sentence structure is improved by removing unnecessary fillers.

× Uh, I don't have, uh, better knowledge about Chinese kids, but as I know that Chinese kids often go library because of they are, uh, want to, uh, know about, uh, history and, uh, their, uh, Chinese history.

✓ Uh, I don't have much knowledge about Chinese kids, but as far as I know, Chinese kids often go to the library because they want to learn about history, especially their Chinese history.

The phrase 'go library' should be 'go to the library' to use the correct preposition. 'Better knowledge' is incorrect; 'much knowledge' or 'good knowledge' is appropriate. The phrase 'because of they are' is incorrect; it should be 'because they are' or better 'because they want to'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correctness.