Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Старайтесь избегать лишних пауз и слов-паразитов, таких как "uh". Также улучшите структуру ответа, чтобы он был более связным и логичным. Например, начните с прямого ответа, затем объясните причину и добавьте детали.

例: I usually go to the library three times a week because I work as a teacher and need a quiet environment to prepare lessons. Although my schedule is busy, I make an effort to visit regularly to focus better.

提案: Избегайте повторений и неясных выражений. Используйте связующие слова для плавного перехода между идеями. Также уточните, что вы имеете в виду под "different speaking".

例: Usually, I go to the library to do my homework. Additionally, I sometimes practice my English there because the library offers various speaking practice sessions.

提案: Старайтесь говорить более чётко и избегать грамматических ошибок. Постройте ответ логично: сначала ответьте на вопрос, затем объясните причину и приведите детали.

例: I don't clearly remember going to the library as a child because my mother told me we had a library at home. Therefore, I spent most of my time reading books there.

提案: Отвечайте точно на заданный вопрос. В данном случае, вопрос о китайских детях, а вы говорите о детях в Узбекистане. Также улучшите связность и полноту ответа.

例: Although I live in Uzbekistan, I believe that Chinese children often go to the library because libraries are common in many cities, and reading is encouraged among young people.

× That's why I don't have enough time sometimes, uh, going to the library, but I try to go to a library so three times a week because it's, I love quite environment.

✓ That's why I don't have enough time sometimes to go to the library, but I try to go to the library three times a week because I love the quiet environment.

The phrase 'going to the library' is incorrectly used after 'don't have enough time'. The correct form is the infinitive 'to go' after expressions of time availability. Also, 'a library' should be 'the library' to specify a particular place, and 'quite environment' should be 'quiet environment' (adjective correction).

× but I try to go to a library so three times a week because it's, I love quite environment.

✓ but I try to go to the library three times a week because I love the quiet environment.

The definite article 'the' is needed before 'library' and 'quiet environment' to specify particular known places or things. 'A library' is indefinite and less appropriate here.

× Usually I go there for doing my homework, but sometimes, uh, uh, I go there for practicing my English because in the library, uh, have different speaking.

✓ Usually I go there to do my homework, but sometimes I go there to practice my English because the library has different speaking activities.

The preposition 'for' is incorrectly used before gerunds 'doing' and 'practicing'. The correct form is 'to do' and 'to practice' after 'go there'. Also, 'in the library, uh, have different speaking' is incomplete and needs a subject and clearer expression.

× because in the library, uh, have different speaking.

✓ because the library has different speaking activities.

The sentence lacks a subject before 'have'. The correct form is 'the library has' to indicate possession or availability of activities.

× As a people who has a fish memory, I cannot clearly remember my childhood by my mom said that I I've never gone to library before as we have We have our own library in our home.

✓ As a person who has a fish memory, I cannot clearly remember my childhood, but my mom said that I've never gone to the library before as we have our own library at home.

'People' is plural; 'person' is singular to match 'a'. 'Library' needs the definite article 'the'. 'By my mom said' is incorrect; 'but my mom said' is correct. 'In our home' is better as 'at home'.

× I've never gone to library before as we have We have our own library in our home.

✓ I've never gone to the library before as we have our own library at home.

The definite article 'the' is required before 'library' to specify a particular place. Also, 'in our home' is better expressed as 'at home'.

× Uh so yeah, I spend a lot of time in our.

✓ So yeah, I spent a lot of time there.

The sentence is incomplete and unclear. 'In our' is incomplete; it should specify the place or be replaced with 'there'. Also, past tense 'spent' fits better when referring to childhood.

× So yeah, it's really popular among young.

✓ So yeah, it's really popular among young people.

The word 'young' is an adjective and needs a noun to complete the phrase. 'Young people' is the correct plural noun phrase.