Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is generally clear but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure by using linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, instead of 'But it depends on my friends too if they invited me to go to library,' you could say 'However, if my friends invite me, I might go more than twice a week.'

例: Yes, I usually go to the library about twice a week. However, if my friends invite me, I might go more often.

提案: Try to organize your answer with clear linking words and avoid filler words like 'umm'. Also, keep your sentences concise and natural. For example, use 'Firstly,' 'Secondly,' and 'Finally' to structure your points clearly.

例: Firstly, I usually study by myself in the library. Secondly, sometimes my friends invite me to study together. Finally, I often borrow books from there.

提案: Your answer is good but could be improved by adding more specific details and using linking words to connect ideas. For example, you could say 'My teachers often invited me and my friends to the library, where we either read books or studied together.'

例: Yes, I did. My teachers often invited me and my friends to the library, where we either read books or studied together.

提案: Your answer lacks clarity and contains some grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas more clearly and avoid uncertain phrases like 'I guess' repeatedly. Also, use linking words to make your answer coherent.

例: I don't think Chinese kids often go to the library. Instead, they usually study together at cafes or do their homework at someone's house.

× I always go to library around twice a week.

✓ I always go to the library around twice a week.

The noun 'library' is a singular, countable noun and requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place known to both speaker and listener. Omitting 'the' here is incorrect.

× if they invited me to go to library and I can go there around more than twice a week.

✓ if they invited me to go to the library and I can go there around more than twice a week.

Same as above, 'library' needs the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific place.

× I always study by myself in library and secondly sometimes my friends umm invite me to study together in library and the the last one is I just want to borrow some books over there.

✓ I always study by myself in the library and secondly sometimes my friends umm invite me to study together in the library and the last one is I just want to borrow some books over there.

Again, 'library' is a specific place and requires the definite article 'the'. Also, 'the the last one' has a repeated article which is corrected to a single 'the'.

× I remember at the time my teachers always invited me to go to library with my friends.

✓ I remember at the time my teachers always invited me to go to the library with my friends.

The definite article 'the' is needed before 'library' because it refers to a specific place.

× Sometimes we just read some books or study together over there.

✓ Sometimes we just read some books or study together over there.

This sentence is correct; no article error here.

× I guess they always go to the cafe to study together with their friends or sometimes they do their homework in in the someone in house someone I guess.

✓ I guess they always go to the cafe to study together with their friends or sometimes they do their homework at someone's house, I guess.

The phrase 'in in the someone in house someone' is incorrect and unclear. The correct expression is 'at someone's house' to indicate location. Also, 'at' is the correct preposition for a house.