Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答は自然ですが、文法の誤りや冗長な表現が見られます。例えば、「I like book, I like books and I like to reading books」は繰り返しが多く、正しい形は「I like books and enjoy reading them」です。また、「a novel of Japan, Japanese and it is very touched me and」は意味が不明瞭で、より具体的に感想を述べると良いでしょう。

例: Yes, I often go to the library because I enjoy reading books. Recently, I have been reading Japanese novels, which deeply moved me due to their emotional stories.

提案: 回答が不完全で文法的にも誤りが多いです。例えば、「I often are looking forward out to books」は不自然で、「I often look for books」などの表現が適切です。また、文が途中で終わっているため、内容を完結に伝える練習が必要です。

例: When I am in the library, I usually look for interesting books because the library has a wide variety of books to choose from.

提案: 回答が不明瞭で、文法的にも誤りがあります。「I read. Many time now and where yes」は意味が通じません。過去の習慣を述べる際は、シンプルで明確な文を心がけましょう。

例: Yes, I went to the library often when I was a kid because I loved reading books.

提案: 回答は意見を述べていますが、時制の混乱や冗長な表現があります。例えば、「yes, yes they did」は過去形でなく現在形の方が適切です。また、「so they go to the library often I think」は「I think」を文頭に置くと自然です。

例: I think Chinese kids often go to the library because many of them like learning new things and enjoy reading books.

× Yes, I do, because I like book, I like books and I like to reading books and actually I often read a novel of Japan, Japanese and it is very touched me and.

✓ Yes, I do, because I like books and I like reading books. Actually, I often read Japanese novels and they touch me deeply.

The word 'book' should be plural 'books' to match the context. 'I like to reading books' is incorrect; it should be 'I like reading books' because 'like' is followed by the gerund form. 'A novel of Japan, Japanese' is awkward; it should be 'Japanese novels'. 'It is very touched me' is incorrect; 'they touch me deeply' is correct because 'novels' is plural and 'touch' is a verb here.

× Yes, I do, because I like book, I like books and I like to reading books and actually I often read a novel of Japan, Japanese and it is very touched me and.

✓ Yes, I do, because I like books and I like reading books. Actually, I often read Japanese novels and they touch me deeply.

'Like' should be followed by the gerund form 'reading' rather than the infinitive 'to reading'. This is a common verb + -ing form error.

× When I when I am in the library I often are looking forward out to books and because library has a lot of books and variety of books and so I can I.

✓ When I am in the library, I often look for books because the library has a lot of books and a variety of them, so I can find what I want.

'I often are looking forward out to books' is incorrect; 'are' should be removed and 'looking forward out to' is not a correct phrase. The correct phrase is 'look for books'. 'Library has' should be 'the library has' to include the definite article. 'Variety of books' should be 'a variety of books'.

× When I when I am in the library I often are looking forward out to books and because library has a lot of books and variety of books and so I can I.

✓ When I am in the library, I often look for books because the library has a lot of books and a variety of them, so I can find what I want.

'Library' needs the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific place known to both speaker and listener.

× Yes, I did, because actually when I was a kid, I read. Many time now and where yes.

✓ Yes, I did, because actually when I was a kid, I read many times.

'Many time now and where yes' is ungrammatical and unclear. It should be 'many times' to indicate frequency in the past. The sentence should be concise and clear.

× This is hard question for me, but in my opinion, yes, yes they did. Many Chinese people like to learn new things and reading books, so they go to the library often I think.

✓ This is a hard question for me, but in my opinion, yes, they do. Many Chinese people like to learn new things and read books, so they often go to the library, I think.

'Yes, they did' is incorrect here because the question is about a habitual action in the present, so 'they do' is correct. 'Like to learn new things and reading books' should be parallel: 'like to learn new things and read books'. The adverb 'often' should be placed before the verb 'go'.