Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but it would be more natural to say "the library" instead of just "library." Also, try to avoid redundancy by combining similar ideas and use linking words to improve coherence. For example, you could say "I frequently visit the library because I love reading books and studying there, as it offers a peaceful environment without distractions. Additionally, I prefer borrowing books rather than buying them."

例: I often go to the library because I enjoy reading and find it easier to concentrate there due to the quiet atmosphere. Moreover, I prefer borrowing books from the library instead of purchasing them, as it is more economical.

提案: Your answer is understandable but could be improved by correcting grammar and using more precise vocabulary. The phrase "mindful books" is unclear; perhaps you meant "thought-provoking books" or "interesting books." Also, avoid starting sentences with conjunctions like "since" without completing the thought. Try to structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details linked logically.

例: I usually spend my time in the library reading interesting books, which is my favourite hobby. Additionally, I study there during exam periods because the environment helps me focus better.

提案: Your answer addresses the question but contains grammatical errors and unclear phrases. For example, "there was no one in near me" is confusing; you might mean "there was no library near me." Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Try to say: "No, I didn't go to the library as a child because there wasn't one near my home. Instead, I usually read books at home since my parents also enjoyed reading."

例: No, I didn't visit the library when I was a child because there wasn't a library close to where I lived. Instead, I read books at home since my parents were fond of reading as well.

提案: Your answer is vague and contains irrelevant information. The fact that China is a developing nation does not directly relate to whether children go to the library. Also, avoid run-on sentences and improve clarity by structuring your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. For example: "Yes, many Chinese children often visit libraries because education is highly valued in China, and libraries provide valuable resources for learning."

例: Yes, Chinese children frequently go to libraries as reading and education are very important in Chinese culture. Libraries offer a quiet place for them to study and access a wide range of books.

× Yes, I frequently visit library because I love to read books and I also like to study there because of peaceful environment and no distraction.

✓ Yes, I frequently visit the library because I love to read books and I also like to study there because of the peaceful environment and no distractions.

The definite article 'the' is required before 'library' and 'peaceful environment' because they refer to specific, known places or conditions. Also, 'distraction' should be plural 'distractions' to correctly express the absence of multiple distractions.

× Additionally, I prefer to borrow books from library instead of buying them.

✓ Additionally, I prefer to borrow books from the library instead of buying them.

The definite article 'the' is needed before 'library' because it refers to a specific place known to both speaker and listener.

× Since reading is my favorite hobby so I love to read mindful books and sometimes I also study there when my exams are going on.

✓ Since reading is my favorite hobby, I love to read meaningful books and sometimes I also study there when my exams are going on.

The conjunction 'since' already indicates cause, so 'so' is redundant and should be removed. Also, a comma is needed after the introductory clause. The word 'mindful' is incorrect here; 'meaningful' better fits the context.

× No, I didn't go to library when I was a kid because there was no one in near me.

✓ No, I didn't go to the library when I was a kid because there was no one near me.

The definite article 'the' is required before 'library' as it refers to a specific place. The phrase 'in near me' is incorrect; it should be 'near me' without 'in'.

× No, I didn't go to library when I was a kid because there was no one in near me.

✓ No, I didn't go to the library when I was a kid because there was no one near me.

The preposition 'in' is unnecessary and incorrect before 'near me'. The correct phrase is simply 'near me'.

× Usually I read books which was in my home because my parents like to read books also.

✓ Usually I read books which were in my home because my parents like to read books also.

The relative pronoun 'which' refers to 'books' which is plural, so the verb should be 'were' instead of 'was' to agree in number.

× Usually I read books which was in my home because my parents like to read books also.

✓ Usually I read books which were in my home because my parents like to read books also.

No additional article correction needed here beyond the verb agreement already addressed.

× Since China is a developing nation and also their kids are so smart and yes they go to library.

✓ Since China is a developing nation and also their kids are so smart, yes, they go to the library.

The definite article 'the' is needed before 'library' because it refers to a specific place. Also, commas are added for better sentence flow.