Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer needs to be more natural and grammatically correct. Use simple present tense for habitual actions and avoid redundancy. Also, clarify your ideas with linking words and correct vocabulary.

例: Yes, I often go to the library at my school because it is a quiet place where I can read books. Sometimes, when I feel tired or have a headache, I rest there for a while.

提案: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Start with a clear topic sentence and add specific details using linking words. Avoid vague phrases and improve sentence structure.

例: In the library, I usually read books because I enjoy learning new things. I also use the library to study and find information for my school projects.

提案: Your answer has grammatical errors and unclear expressions. Use past tense consistently and explain your reasons clearly with linking words.

例: Not really. When I was a kid, I did not go to the library because I did not understand the language used in the books. Also, I did not like the quiet atmosphere there.

提案: Your answer is confusing and grammatically incorrect. Use clear sentences with correct grammar and provide reasons with linking words.

例: I don't think many Chinese kids often go to the library because they usually spend their free time playing games outside. However, some children do visit the library to study or read books.

× Yes, I was going to library for reading books.

✓ Yes, I go to the library to read books.

The original sentence incorrectly uses the past continuous tense 'was going' and omits the article 'the' before 'library'. The phrase 'for reading books' is awkward; the correct form is 'to read books' to express purpose. The corrected sentence uses the simple present tense to match the question about habitual action and includes the definite article 'the'.

× A library is a quite a place in my school and I like library so much.

✓ The library is quite a nice place in my school and I like the library so much.

The article 'A' is incorrectly used before 'library' when referring to a specific library known to both speaker and listener; 'The' is appropriate. Also, 'a quite a place' is incorrect; it should be 'quite a nice place'. The definite article 'the' is needed before the second 'library' as well.

× When I have an headache or something I'll go live it and sleep there.

✓ When I have a headache or something, I'll go live there and sleep.

The article 'an' is incorrect before 'headache' because 'headache' starts with a consonant sound; it should be 'a headache'. The phrase 'go live it' is incorrect; 'go live there' is more appropriate. Also, a comma is needed after the introductory clause.

× I usually do in the library.

✓ I usually read in the library.

The original sentence lacks an object after 'do', making it incomplete. Adding the verb 'read' clarifies the activity performed in the library.

× I like reading books and I go to the library for everything a book.

✓ I like reading books and I go to the library for all kinds of books.

The phrase 'for everything a book' is ungrammatical and unclear. The correct expression is 'for all kinds of books' to indicate a variety of books.

× Not really. But when I was a kid, I'm not able to go library because I don't understand the language and I don't like this.

✓ Not really. But when I was a kid, I was not able to go to the library because I didn't understand the language and I didn't like it.

The modal verb 'I'm not able to' is incorrect in past context; it should be 'I was not able to'. The preposition 'to' is missing before 'the library'. The verbs 'don't understand' and 'don't like' should be in past tense to match the time frame. 'This' should be 'it' to refer to the situation.

× That's why I'm not able to go library when I was a kid.

✓ That's why I was not able to go to the library when I was a kid.

The modal verb and tense should be past: 'was not able to'. The preposition 'to' is missing before 'the library'. The tense in the clause should be consistent past tense.

× Do children have lots of time spending with playing games outside the outside the house and really children's was going to library?

✓ Do children have lots of time to spend playing games outside the house, and do children really go to the library?

The phrase 'time spending with playing games' is incorrect; it should be 'time to spend playing games'. The repetition 'outside the outside the house' is an error. 'Children's was going to library' is ungrammatical; it should be 'do children really go to the library?'. The sentence is corrected for clarity and grammatical accuracy.