Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer has grammatical errors and unnatural phrasing. Try to use correct verb forms and prepositions, and avoid redundancy. Also, keep your answer concise and clear.

例: I go to the library occasionally. Whenever I have free time, I enjoy visiting the library to read newspapers.

提案: Avoid repeating words and incorrect verb forms. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, be specific about your activities in the library.

例: When I visit the library, I usually read story books. Additionally, I like reading newspapers because they make me feel happy.

提案: Your answer has many grammatical mistakes and unclear expressions. Use past tense correctly and avoid repetition. Provide clear reasons and details.

例: I didn't go to the library when I was a child because my parents were very strict and didn't take me anywhere. However, I sometimes read books at home.

提案: Avoid filler words like 'uh' and incorrect verb forms. Use clear and natural expressions. Also, organize your answer logically with linking words.

例: Actually, I don't know about Chinese kids because I don't live in China. But in my country, many children enjoy visiting the library to read books and newspapers.

× From time to time I prefer to go library.

✓ From time to time I prefer to go to the library.

The preposition 'to' is required after 'go' when indicating a destination, and the definite article 'the' is needed before 'library' because it is a specific place.

× Whenever I get time, then I am really fond of to visiting library.

✓ Whenever I get time, I am really fond of visiting the library.

The phrase 'fond of' should be followed by a gerund without 'to'. Also, 'the' is needed before 'library' as it refers to a specific place.

× When I go there then I prefers to read a newspaper.

✓ When I go there, I prefer to read a newspaper.

The verb 'prefer' should be in base form 'prefer' after 'I' (first person singular). 'Prefers' is for third person singular subjects.

× When when I go there then I prefers to read story books.

✓ When I go there, I prefer to read story books.

Same as above, 'prefer' is correct for first person singular 'I', not 'prefers'. Also, remove duplicate 'when' and unnecessary 'then'.

× On the other hand, I prefer to read newspaper which is makes me feel happy.

✓ On the other hand, I prefer to read the newspaper which makes me feel happy.

'The' is needed before 'newspaper' as it refers to a specific item. Also, 'which makes' is correct; 'is makes' is incorrect.

× When I was a child then I don't I didn't go library as my parents are very strict so they don't they did didn't bring me anywhere.

✓ When I was a child, I didn't go to the library because my parents were very strict and they didn't bring me anywhere.

Use past tense 'didn't' for negative past actions. 'Go to the library' requires preposition 'to' and article 'the'. Also, 'were' is past tense of 'are'. Remove redundant words.

× Sometimes I prefers I prefers to read book in my home.

✓ Sometimes I prefer to read books at home.

'Prefer' is correct for first person singular. 'Books' should be plural to match general meaning. Use 'at home' instead of 'in my home' for natural expression.

× Actually, I don't know the answer as I'm not, uh, live in China.

✓ Actually, I don't know the answer as I don't live in China.

Use 'don't live' for present simple negative. 'I'm not live' is incorrect structure.

× If I talk about my country, then many of these are really fond of to visiting library so that they can read books or sometimes they can read newspaper.

✓ If I talk about my country, many people are really fond of visiting the library so that they can read books or sometimes read the newspaper.

'Fond of' should be followed by gerund without 'to'. 'Many of these' is unclear; 'many people' is better. 'The library' and 'the newspaper' need definite articles.