Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时语法和表达不够自然，有语法错误且表达重复。建议简洁明了地回答问题，并避免重复表达。

例: No, I don't go to the library often because I find reading there less interesting than doing sports, which I enjoy more.

提案: 回答中有语法错误（如“will to finish”），表达稍显重复。建议使用连词使句子更连贯，并注意语法准确。

例: I usually read books in the library to gain more information. Besides that, I sometimes finish my homework or just relax there.

提案: 回答中有多处语法错误和重复，表达不清晰。建议简洁直接回答，并用正确时态和句式。

例: Yes, when I was a child, I often went to the library because I enjoyed reading different kinds of books as a hobby.

提案: 回答中有重复词汇，表达不够流畅。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并避免重复。

例: Actually, I think most Chinese kids don't go to the library often because they see reading as a task rather than a hobby, since teachers and parents usually force them to do it.

× No, actually I don't go to library frequently because I think reading books in the library is very boring compared with sports.

✓ No, actually I don't go to the library frequently because I think reading books in the library is very boring compared with sports.

这里缺少定冠词“the”，因为“library”是特指的图书馆，英语中单数可数名词前通常需要冠词。

× However, sometimes I will to finish my homework or relax in the library.

✓ However, sometimes I will finish my homework or relax in the library.

“will”后面直接接动词原形，不能加“to”，这是情态动词的用法错误。

× Yeah, in my childhood I usually go to library because I like to read various kind of books, because I think because I it it just a hobby.

✓ Yeah, in my childhood I usually went to the library because I like to read various kinds of books, because I think it is just a hobby.

1. “go to library”缺少定冠词“the”。2. “various kind of books”应为“various kinds of books”，表示多种类。3. “I it it”是多余重复，应删去。4. 时态应与过去时间状语“in my childhood”一致，动词用过去式“went”。

× Yeah, in my childhood I usually go to library because I like to read various kind of books, because I think because I it it just a hobby.

✓ Yeah, in my childhood I usually went to the library because I liked to read various kinds of books, because I thought it was just a hobby.

描述过去习惯时，动词应使用过去时态，如“went”、“liked”、“thought”、“was”。

× Actually no. In my opinion I think mostly Chinese kids don't go to library because they they think reading books is a task, not a hobby.

✓ Actually no. In my opinion I think mostly Chinese kids don't go to the library because they think reading books is a task, not a hobby.

“go to library”缺少定冠词“the”，应为“go to the library”。

× Actually no. In my opinion I think mostly Chinese kids don't go to library because they they think reading books is a task, not a hobby.

✓ Actually no. In my opinion I think mostly Chinese kids don't go to the library because they think reading books is a task, not a hobby.

句中“they they”重复，应删除多余的“they”。