Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在重复和语法错误，表达不够自然。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用正确的时态和介词。

例: I don't often go to the library, but I enjoy reading comic books at home because the pictures help me understand the story more quickly.

提案: 回答中有许多犹豫词和语法错误，表达不连贯。建议使用连贯的句子，减少填充词，并清晰表达观点。

例: I usually study in the library because it is quiet and there is no loud music, which helps me concentrate better.

提案: 回答重复且语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议简化句子，避免重复，并正确使用时态和介词。

例: When I was a kid, my school had a library class where the teacher taught us how to use the computer to find books on different shelves and levels.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议使用完整句子，正确使用时态和介词，并清楚表达观点。

例: In our school, each class has a reading corner where students can read books during free time, so they don't often go to the library.

× I don't often go to library, but I would like to reading books in my home and reading the books with comics with the pictures, so I can usually understand more quickly than the words and it's very convenient for me.

✓ I don't often go to the library, but I would like to read books at home and read books with comics and pictures, so I can usually understand more quickly than just words, and it's very convenient for me.

这里缺少冠词“the”，应为“the library”。“reading books”应改为动词原形“read books”，因为前面用了“would like to”，后面动词应为原形。"in my home"应改为“at home”，表示在家。"reading the books with comics with the pictures"表达不清，改为“read books with comics and pictures”更准确。

× I don't often go to library, but I would like to reading books in my home and reading the books with comics with the pictures, so I can usually understand more quickly than the words and it's very convenient for me.

✓ I don't often go to the library, but I would like to read books at home and read books with comics and pictures, so I can usually understand more quickly than just words, and it's very convenient for me.

“would like to”后面应接动词原形，不能用动名词“reading”。

× it's, there's no, there's no one talking.

✓ there is no one talking.

“there's no”是“there is no”的缩写，重复使用“it's, there's no, there's no one talking”结构不正确，应简化为“there is no one talking”。

× I would like to, uh, doing study in the library because it's very, umm, uh, it's, there's no, there's no one talking.

✓ I would like to study in the library because there is no one talking.

“would like to”后面应接动词原形“study”，不能用动名词“doing”。

× our school has a has a class that is for library and the teacher will will teach us how to using the computer to finding the books you want and and from different of the shelves and the levels.

✓ Our school has a class for the library, and the teacher will teach us how to use the computer to find the books you want from different shelves and levels.

“has a has a”重复，应去掉一个。“class that is for library”应改为“class for the library”，加冠词“the”。“how to using”应改为“how to use”，不定式后接动词原形。“to finding”应改为“to find”。“different of the shelves”错误，应为“different shelves”。

× In our school, umm in each class umm teacher will let out to uh make a uh, reading reading corner to reading books for free time and so they not often going to library and just reading books in the corner.

✓ In our school, in each class the teacher will let us make a reading corner to read books during free time, so they do not often go to the library and just read books in the corner.

“let out to”错误，应为“let us”。“to reading books”应为“to read books”，不定式后接动词原形。“for free time”应改为“during free time”。“they not often going”应改为“they do not often go”。“going to library”应加冠词“the library”。