Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时应更自然流畅，避免语法错误，并且可以稍微扩展内容，使回答更丰富。比如说明为什么喜欢这些书。

例: Yes, I often go to the library because I enjoy reading books about medicine and mathematics. These subjects fascinate me as they help me understand the world better.

提案: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，建议使用更自然的句式，并且用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: I usually borrow books about medicine and mathematics because I enjoy reading them. They help me learn new things and improve my knowledge.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，建议使用正确的时态和词汇，并且表达更清晰。

例: Yes, I went to the library when I was a kid. I often borrowed books about mathematics because I found reading them enjoyable and relaxing.

提案: 回答中有重复和语法错误，建议简洁表达并使用连接词使句子更流畅。

例: Yes, I think Chinese students often go to the library. When I visit, I see many students reading books on various subjects or doing their homework there.

× I usually borrow some book about medicine and mathematics in library because I think when I am reading this kind of book I feel enjoy.

✓ I usually borrow some books about medicine and mathematics in the library because I think when I am reading these kinds of books I feel enjoyment.

这里'some book'应为'some books'，因为表示不止一本书；'this kind of book'应为'these kinds of books'，因为指多种类的书。名词单复数要保持一致。

× I usually borrow some book about medicine and mathematics in library because I think when I am reading this kind of book I feel enjoy.

✓ I usually borrow some books about medicine and mathematics in the library because I think when I am reading these kinds of books I feel enjoyment.

'in library'缺少定冠词'the'，应为'in the library'，因为特指图书馆。

× I usually borrow some book about medicine and mathematics in library because I think when I am reading this kind of book I feel enjoy.

✓ I usually borrow some books about medicine and mathematics in the library because I think when I am reading these kinds of books I feel enjoyment.

'I feel enjoy'中'enjoy'是动词，需用名词形式'enjoyment'或改为'I feel happy'。

× I went to the library when I was a kid because I would borrow comments or some books about mathematics because I felt quite enjoyable and relaxing when I was breathing them.

✓ I went to the library when I was a kid because I would borrow comics or some books about mathematics because I felt quite happy and relaxed when I was reading them.

'comments'应为'comics'（漫画）；'enjoyable and relaxing'形容词用法不当，描述感受应用'happy and relaxed'；'breathing'应为'reading'，动词错误。

× I usually borrow some book about medicine and mathematics in library because I think when I am reading this kind of book I feel enjoy.

✓ I usually borrow some books about medicine and mathematics in the library because I think when I am reading these kinds of books I feel enjoyment.

'about medicine and mathematics'中'about'用法正确，但整体表达更自然可用'books on medicine and mathematics'。

× Yes, I think Chinese students often go to the library because when I when I go to the library I see so many students there in library, maybe some reading artist soft skills book or some doing their homework.

✓ Yes, I think Chinese students often go to the library because when I go to the library I see so many students there, maybe some reading books on art and soft skills or some doing their homework.

'artist soft skills book'表达不清，应为'art and soft skills books'；'some reading'后应接复数名词；'there in library'缺少定冠词，应为'there in the library'。

× Yes, I think Chinese students often go to the library because when I when I go to the library I see so many students there in library, maybe some reading artist soft skills book or some doing their homework.

✓ Yes, I think Chinese students often go to the library because when I go to the library I see so many students there, maybe some reading books on art and soft skills or some doing their homework.

'there in library'缺少定冠词'the'，应为'there in the library'。