Library— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you often go to the library?
受験者
In the past I went to the library really frequently, but now I have more options like I have my phone, I have I have my computer, and with those devices I can look through information on the Internet. So now I don't go to the library often.
試験官
What do you usually do in the library?
受験者
So I usually read books like I really love some books about adventure and technology. Sometimes I write something in the library because the atmosphere is really great. The environment is really quiet, so nobody talks, nobody bothers me.
試験官
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
受験者
So when I was a kid I went to library about twice a week. At that time I don't have too much devices like smartphone or computer, so the only way I can get some some some information is a library. So I went there really often.
試験官
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
受験者
It depends on individuals. Some Chinese kids, they prefer the quiet atmosphere and they like reading in the library. But the other child's really love to watch some books on the Internet.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you often go to the library?
スコア: 75.0提案: 你的回答表达了过去和现在的对比，但语言有些重复且不够简洁。建议减少重复，使用更自然流畅的表达，并且适当使用连接词使句子更连贯。
例: I used to visit the library frequently, but nowadays I prefer using my phone and computer to access information online, so I rarely go to the library.
What do you usually do in the library?
スコア: 80.0提案: 回答内容较丰富，但句子结构较简单，且部分表达重复。建议使用更多连接词和多样词汇，使表达更自然且连贯。
例: I usually read books, especially those about adventure and technology. Moreover, I sometimes write in the library because the quiet environment allows me to concentrate without any distractions.
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
スコア: 70.0提案: 回答中存在语法错误和重复词汇，建议注意时态一致性，避免重复，并使用连接词使句子更流畅。
例: When I was a child, I visited the library about twice a week because I didn't have many devices like smartphones or computers, so the library was my main source of information.
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
スコア: 65.0提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不准确，建议注意主谓一致，避免重复，并使用更准确的词汇表达观点。
例: It depends on the individual. Some Chinese children prefer the quiet atmosphere of the library and enjoy reading there, while others like to read books online.
文法
× At that time I don't have too much devices like smartphone or computer, so the only way I can get some some some information is a library.
✓ At that time I didn't have too many devices like a smartphone or computer, so the only way I could get some information was the library.
这里描述的是过去的情况，应该使用过去时态。'don't have' 应改为 'didn't have'，'too much devices' 应改为 'too many devices'（因为devices是可数名词），'is a library' 应改为 'was the library'。此外，'some some some' 是重复错误，应去掉多余的重复。
× At that time I don't have too much devices like smartphone or computer, so the only way I can get some some some information is a library.
✓ At that time I didn't have too many devices like a smartphone or computer, so the only way I could get some information was the library.
'devices' 是可数名词，量词应使用 'many' 而非 'much'。因此应改为 'too many devices'。
× At that time I don't have too much devices like smartphone or computer, so the only way I can get some some some information is a library.
✓ At that time I didn't have too many devices like a smartphone or computer, so the only way I could get some information was the library.
'smartphone' 和 'computer' 前应加不定冠词 'a'，因为这里指的是泛指的单个设备。'a library' 应改为 'the library'，因为前文已明确指代特定的图书馆。
× But the other child's really love to watch some books on the Internet.
✓ But the other children really love to read some books on the Internet.
'child's' 是单数所有格形式，句意应为复数 'children'。此外，'watch books' 不合适，应改为 'read books'。
× But the other child's really love to watch some books on the Internet.
✓ But the other children really love to read some books on the Internet.
'watch books' 不符合英语习惯，书籍应使用 'read'。同时，主语改为复数 'children' 后，谓语动词 'love' 保持原形。
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