Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答缺乏直接回应问题的主题句，表达不够自然且有些冗余。建议在回答时直接说明是否经常去图书馆，并给出具体原因，避免无关或重复的内容。

例: Yes, I often go to the library because I enjoy reading and it provides a quiet environment for studying.

提案: 回答内容不够具体且表达不清晰，缺少连贯的逻辑和详细描述。建议明确说明在图书馆通常做什么，并用连接词丰富内容，使回答更自然流畅。

例: Usually, I read books or study quietly in the library because it helps me concentrate better than at home.

提案: 回答偏离了问题主题，没有直接回答是否小时候去过图书馆。建议直接回答问题，并提供具体细节或理由，避免无关内容。

例: Yes, I often went to the library as a child because I loved borrowing storybooks and learning new things.

提案: 回答不明确且缺乏具体内容，表达混乱。建议直接回答问题，给出具体观点和理由，使用连贯的句子表达。

例: I think many Chinese kids do go to the library, especially those who enjoy reading and want to improve their knowledge.

× When I feel like to do so then I would and vice versa.

✓ When I feel like doing so, then I would, and vice versa.

动词短语 'feel like' 后面应接动名词形式，不能接不定式 'to do'。因此应改为 'feel like doing'。

× It's my choice which is why I go to library.

✓ It's my choice which is why I go to the library.

在英语中，表示特定场所时，'library' 前需要加定冠词 'the'。

× I know playing with my phone for too long is no good, but I just can't help.

✓ I know playing with my phone for too long is no good, but I just can't help it.

短语 'can't help' 后面应加宾语 'it'，表示无法控制某行为。

× It's too bad that I have been forgetful lately and I have to say, I'm somehow got a strong memory so I really can't keep things in mind.

✓ It's too bad that I have been forgetful lately and I have to say, I somehow have a strong memory so I really can't keep things in mind.

'I'm got' 是错误的时态和结构，应改为 'I have' 表示现在完成时态。

× I don't know why not forget things and I think nothing wrong with it.

✓ I don't know why I forget things and I think there's nothing wrong with it.

缺少主语 'I'，且 'nothing wrong with it' 前应加 'there's' 表示存在。

× After all, life is so long that there is no need for being obsessed.

✓ After all, life is so long that there is no need to be obsessed.

'need' 后面应接不定式 'to be'，而不是动名词 'being'。

× Maybe they go.

✓ Maybe they do go.

在肯定句中，'maybe' 后面通常用助动词 'do' 来加强语气。

× I can't say I really do. I can't say the children really do.

✓ I can't say I really do. I can't say that the children really do.

缺少连接词 'that'，使句子结构更完整。

× All I can say is that when hearing this question, I just came up with this directly.

✓ All I can say is that when I heard this question, I just came up with this directly.

'when hearing' 应改为过去时态 'when I heard'，使时间一致。