Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is understandable but has some grammatical errors and inconsistent tense usage. Try to use present tense consistently and avoid redundancy. Also, keep your answer concise and clear.

例: I often go to the library because I find the atmosphere enjoyable and it helps me focus on my reading. However, sometimes I prefer studying at home for comfort.

提案: Your answer has grammatical mistakes and lacks linking words. Use correct verb forms and connect your ideas smoothly to make your answer more natural and effective.

例: Usually, I research and study in the library because it helps me concentrate on my lessons. Additionally, I sometimes take practice tests there, which is very helpful.

提案: There are tense inconsistencies and some awkward phrasing. Use past tense consistently and improve sentence structure for clarity.

例: Yes, when I was a kid, I often went to the library with my classmates to research and study for our exams. It was very useful.

提案: Your answer is clear but could be improved by using linking words and more precise vocabulary. Also, avoid starting with 'Actually' as it sounds informal.

例: I am not sure about all Chinese kids, but nowadays many prefer to study at home using e-books and the Internet instead of going to the library.

× The library atmosphere is really enjoyable for me and when I want to focus on my reading, I went to the library and studied there, but sometimes I prefer to study at home.

✓ The library atmosphere is really enjoyable for me and when I want to focus on my reading, I go to the library and study there, but sometimes I prefer to study at home.

The sentence mixes present and past tense incorrectly. 'Went' and 'studied' are past tense, but the context suggests a habitual action, so present tense 'go' and 'study' should be used instead.

× Usually I research and studying and I can focus on my lessons and do some tests there.

✓ Usually I research and study and I can focus on my lessons and do some tests there.

The phrase 'research and studying' incorrectly mixes base verb and gerund form. Both verbs should be in the same form, so 'research and study' is correct.

× Yes, I remember that when I was a kid I went to the library with my classmates and try to research and studying there for our exams.

✓ Yes, I remember that when I was a kid I went to the library with my classmates and tried to research and study there for our exams.

The sentence mixes past and present tense incorrectly. 'Try' should be in past tense 'tried' to match 'went' and 'remembered'. Also, 'research and studying' should be 'research and study' for parallel structure.

× Yes, I remember that when I was a kid I went to the library with my classmates and try to research and studying there for our exams.

✓ Yes, I remember that when I was a kid I went to the library with my classmates and tried to research and study there for our exams.

The phrase 'research and studying' incorrectly mixes base verb and gerund form. Both verbs should be in the same form, so 'research and study' is correct.