Library— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you often go to the library?
受験者
I hardly visit the library because I prefer reading books online because it's more convenient for me. I stay at the outskirts of Lagos and there aren't much libraries around so I rather just read.
試験官
What do you usually do in the library?
受験者
Like I said earlier, I rarely go to the library, but if I had the opportunity to visit one, I would definitely go there to check out some art books because I am quite interested in arts and I'd like to, you know, develop my, my artistic skills so.
試験官
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
受験者
Yes, I visited the library quite a few times when I was much younger, especially in primary school during break time, we had the opportunity to, you know, visit the library and to see what books were in store and it was really an amazing.
試験官
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
受験者
I I'm not really sure about this, but knowing how advanced China is, I'm pretty sure that Chinese kids have the chance to visit the libraries quite often to probably learn new languages or do their research.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you often go to the library?
スコア: 75.0提案: Your answer is clear but a bit repetitive and could be more concise. Try to avoid repeating the same reason twice and use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. Also, correct 'aren't much libraries' to 'aren't many libraries'.
例: I rarely visit the library because I prefer reading books online, which is more convenient for me. Besides, I live on the outskirts of Lagos where there aren't many libraries nearby.
What do you usually do in the library?
スコア: 70.0提案: Your answer is understandable but includes hesitations and fillers like 'you know' and repeated words. Try to speak more fluently and directly. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid redundancy.
例: Although I rarely visit the library, if I had the chance, I would check out art books because I am interested in arts and want to develop my artistic skills.
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
スコア: 65.0提案: Your answer has some hesitations and incomplete sentences. Avoid fillers like 'you know' and finish your thoughts clearly. Also, use linking words to make your answer coherent and add specific details about why it was amazing.
例: Yes, I visited the library several times when I was younger, especially during primary school break times. It was amazing because I could explore many interesting books and learn new things.
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
スコア: 70.0提案: Your answer is polite but includes hesitations and uncertain language. Try to be more confident and avoid fillers like 'I I'm' and 'probably'. Use linking words to connect your ideas clearly.
例: Although I am not certain, I believe Chinese kids often visit libraries because China is advanced, and they likely use libraries to learn new languages and conduct research.
文法
× I stay at the outskirts of Lagos and there aren't much libraries around so I rather just read.
✓ I stay at the outskirts of Lagos and there aren't many libraries around so I rather just read.
The word 'libraries' is plural, so the quantifier should be 'many' instead of 'much'. 'Much' is used with uncountable nouns, while 'many' is used with countable plural nouns like 'libraries'.
× it was really an amazing.
✓ it was really amazing.
The word 'amazing' is an adjective and does not need the article 'an' before it. 'An' is used before singular countable nouns, but 'amazing' here is used as an adjective describing the experience, so the article is unnecessary.
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