Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your response more concise and natural by directly answering the question, using correct grammar, and avoiding redundancy. For example, mention your routine and reasons clearly, and keep the answer within 5 sentences.

例: Yes, I often go to the library as part of my daily routine because my student life is quite hectic. I enjoy visiting the library not only to read books but also to relax my mind. It is a peaceful place that helps me focus and unwind.

提案: Your answer is relevant but could be improved by using more natural expressions and linking words to connect ideas. Also, avoid grammatical mistakes and clarify your points. Try to explain why you choose different activities in the library.

例: It depends on my mood. Sometimes, I like to read various books, such as comedies, cookbooks, and hotel management guides. However, when I feel tired, I sometimes take a short nap there because the library is quiet and spacious.

提案: Your answer has good content but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Use past tense consistently when talking about childhood. Also, avoid repetition and improve sentence structure for clarity.

例: Yes, I definitely went to the library when I was a child. My school had a special library with many books about comedies and cartoons. I often borrowed different kinds of comics from there, which I really enjoyed.

提案: It's good to be honest if you don't know the answer, but try to respond politely and briefly without over-explaining. You can also give a general opinion or say you are not sure, which shows willingness to engage.

例: I'm not sure about that, but I think many children in China do visit libraries to study or read books.

× Yes, of course I often go to the library on my daily routine just because of the hectic schedule of my student life.

✓ Yes, of course I often go to the library as part of my daily routine because of the hectic schedule of my student life.

The phrase 'on my daily routine' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'as part of' or 'in' when referring to routines. This is a prepositional usage issue related to present tense context.

× I love to go to the library not just to read books but also for to relax my mind and I have also go to the library just because it is the peace place and my surrounding which I.

✓ I love to go to the library not just to read books but also to relax my mind, and I also go to the library because it is a peaceful place and my surroundings are calm.

The phrase 'for to relax' is incorrect; the correct form is 'to relax'. Also, 'have also go' is incorrect; it should be 'also go'. 'Peace place' should be 'peaceful place'. The sentence is also incomplete and unclear, so it has been rephrased for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× But sometimes I like to do sleep in the library because in the library there is space in the surrounding.

✓ But sometimes I like to sleep in the library because there is space in the surroundings.

The phrase 'like to do sleep' is incorrect; 'like to sleep' or 'like sleeping' is correct. Also, 'space in the surrounding' should be 'space in the surroundings' to correctly refer to the area around.

× Yes, definitely. I often go to the library when I am in the childhood.

✓ Yes, definitely. I often went to the library when I was a child.

The sentence refers to a past time ('when I was a kid'), so the verb tense should be past ('went' instead of 'go'). Also, 'in the childhood' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'when I was a child'.

× In my school there is a library which was very special to me because there was a lot of books in the library related to the comedies and cartoons.

✓ In my school, there was a library which was very special to me because there were a lot of books in the library related to comedies and cartoons.

Since the sentence refers to the past, 'there is' should be 'there was'. Also, 'there was a lot of books' is incorrect; it should be 'there were a lot of books' because 'books' is plural.

× I often go to the library for free different kinds of books like comics.

✓ I often went to the library to borrow different kinds of books like comics for free.

The sentence refers to past habits, so the verb should be in past tense ('went' instead of 'go'). Also, the phrase 'for free different kinds of books' is awkward; it is clearer to say 'to borrow different kinds of books like comics for free'.

× Well, I have no idea regarding this question and I never make false random comments on questions because it leads to the arguments and conflicts between people.

✓ Well, I have no idea about this question and I never make false or random comments on questions because it leads to arguments and conflicts between people.

The phrase 'regarding this question' is better expressed as 'about this question'. Also, 'the arguments' should be 'arguments' without 'the' because it refers to arguments in general. The phrase 'false random comments' is awkward; 'false or random comments' is clearer.

× So from my opinion I want to leave that question so sorry.

✓ So, in my opinion, I want to leave that question; sorry.

The phrase 'from my opinion' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'in my opinion'. Also, the sentence structure is awkward; adding commas and a semicolon improves clarity and correctness.