Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it is somewhat repetitive and could be more concise. Try to avoid redundancy by combining similar ideas and using linking words to improve coherence. Also, vary your vocabulary to sound more natural.

例: Yes, I often visit the library because I like to borrow books to read at home and also study there in a quiet environment.

提案: Your answer addresses the question but is slightly repetitive and contains minor grammatical errors. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and be careful with article usage. Also, try to provide more specific details to enrich your answer.

例: I usually study for my lectures at the library because it offers a quiet space. Additionally, I like to read books there to relax and clear my mind.

提案: Your answer is detailed and relevant, but it repeats the phrase 'very often' and has a small grammatical mistake ('wish I were' should be 'wish I had'). Try to vary your expressions and check verb forms for accuracy.

例: No, I rarely went to the library as a child because my parents were busy and didn't allow me to go out alone. However, I wish I had visited more often since I believe libraries are important for children's learning.

提案: Your answer is honest but could be improved by avoiding repetition and grammatical errors. Use linking words to connect ideas and be more specific. Also, ensure subject-verb agreement and article usage are correct.

例: Although I'm not Chinese and have limited knowledge, I believe Chinese children often visit libraries because education is highly valued in their culture, especially their children's learning.

× I mostly study there for my educational purposes and often I go library to read books and clear my mind.

✓ I mostly study there for my educational purposes and often I go to the library to read books and clear my mind.

The preposition 'to' is missing before 'the library'. In English, when indicating movement towards a place, the preposition 'to' is required before the noun. Therefore, 'go library' should be corrected to 'go to the library'.

× But I wish I were because I think it's very important for children to visit library.

✓ But I wish I were because I think it's very important for children to visit the library.

The noun 'library' here refers to a specific place that is generally known, so the definite article 'the' is needed before 'library'. Omitting 'the' in this context is incorrect.

× I believe Chinese kids go to library regularly because I know Chinese people values education and their children's education especially.

✓ I believe Chinese kids go to the library regularly because I know Chinese people value education and their children's education especially.

First, the preposition 'to' requires the definite article 'the' before 'library' to specify the place, so 'go to library' should be 'go to the library'. Second, 'Chinese people values' is incorrect subject-verb agreement; 'people' is plural, so the verb should be 'value'.

× I believe Chinese kids go to library regularly because I know Chinese people values education and their children's education especially.

✓ I believe Chinese kids go to the library regularly because I know Chinese people value education and their children's education especially.

The subject 'Chinese people' is plural, so the verb should be 'value' instead of 'values' to agree in number.