Library— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you often go to the library?
受験者
Not as often as I would have loved to, but during the weekends I find out about any nearby library and I get to read some books. That helps me to relax and also advance my vocabulary. I found the library very cozy because it's a very quiet area where I get to.
試験官
What do you usually do in the library?
受験者
Reading of course I get to read articles that involve history and also motivational books that would help me in my day-to-day life. I also spend time reading about out authors that have produced book and all their inspirations regarding the article they produced thereby.
試験官
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
受験者
I was not opportune to visit the library, but my first visitation to the library was as a teenager where I went with my mother. We both had a very exciting moment where she showed me a lot of book by some some some developed authors and I found this really fascinating.
試験官
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
受験者
It depends I'm not from Chinese I but in my country I would say we love reading a whole lot because it improves in our vocabulary and our daily life. Chinese children. According to the movies I've watched over the years, I found out that they also pick interest in exciting books which also.
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総合
Part 1
Do you often go to the library?
スコア: 70.0提案: Your answer is good but a bit long and slightly unclear at the end. Try to keep your sentences clear and concise, and avoid incomplete thoughts. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, you can say, "I don't go to the library often, but on weekends, I try to visit nearby libraries to read books. This helps me relax and improve my vocabulary because the library is a quiet and cozy place."
例: I don't go to the library often, but on weekends, I try to visit nearby libraries to read books. This helps me relax and improve my vocabulary because the library is a quiet and cozy place.
What do you usually do in the library?
スコア: 65.0提案: Your answer has good content but lacks clear structure and linking words. Also, some sentences are unclear or incomplete. Try to start with a clear topic sentence, then add supporting details using linking words like "for example" or "also." For instance, "In the library, I usually read articles about history and motivational books that help me in daily life. I also like to learn about authors and their inspirations."
例: In the library, I usually read articles about history and motivational books that help me in daily life. I also like to learn about authors and their inspirations.
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
スコア: 68.0提案: Your answer is relevant but contains some repetition and awkward phrasing. Try to avoid repeating words and use clearer expressions. Also, use linking words to connect ideas. For example, "I didn't visit the library as a child, but my first visit was as a teenager with my mother. We had an exciting time because she showed me many books by well-known authors, which I found fascinating."
例: I didn't visit the library as a child, but my first visit was as a teenager with my mother. We had an exciting time because she showed me many books by well-known authors, which I found fascinating.
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
スコア: 55.0提案: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Avoid fragmented sentences and try to answer directly. Also, use linking words to make your answer coherent. For example, "I'm not from China, but in my country, we love reading because it improves our vocabulary and daily life. From what I've seen in movies, Chinese children also enjoy reading interesting books."
例: I'm not from China, but in my country, we love reading because it improves our vocabulary and daily life. From what I've seen in movies, Chinese children also enjoy reading interesting books.
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