Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to avoid filler words like 'umm' and 'uh' to make your speech more fluent and natural. Also, correct minor errors such as 'quite environment' to 'quiet environment'. Keep your answer concise and directly relevant to the question, using linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

例: I don't go to the library often these days, but when I was in college, I studied there regularly because the quiet environment helped me focus better. Moreover, seeing other students study motivated me to work harder.

提案: Avoid repetition such as 'prefer better' and use correct collocations like 'concentrate better'. Use linking words like 'especially' and 'therefore' appropriately to make your answer coherent. Try to keep sentences concise and avoid redundancy.

例: I usually study in the library because it offers a quiet and peaceful environment that helps me concentrate better. Especially during exam time, I go there to use my time efficiently and avoid distractions like my phone and social media, which helps me focus fully on my studies.

提案: Avoid repeating phrases like 'because they because'. Use clear and direct sentences. Use linking words such as 'so' appropriately to connect ideas. Try to be more specific about your studying habits to enrich your answer.

例: No, I didn't go to the library as a child because there wasn't one in my hometown. So, I usually studied in my room at home where I had a study desk. This comfortable and personal space helped me concentrate better and made studying more enjoyable.

提案: Focus your answer directly on the question about library usage. Avoid unrelated information like chores. Use more precise vocabulary and provide specific reasons or examples related to library habits. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

例: Yes, many Chinese kids often go to the library because their parents encourage them to develop good study habits early. For example, they spend time reading and doing homework there, which helps them become more disciplined and efficient learners.

× The quite environment in the library helped me uh focus better and avoid distractions.

✓ The quiet environment in the library helped me focus better and avoid distractions.

The word 'quite' is an adverb meaning 'completely' or 'to a certain extent', but here the adjective 'quiet' is needed to describe the environment. Using 'quiet' correctly describes the peacefulness of the library environment.

× I usually study in the library because it provides a quiet and peaceful environment which helps me concentrate prefer better.

✓ I usually study in the library because it provides a quiet and peaceful environment which helps me concentrate better.

The phrase 'concentrate prefer better' is incorrect. The word 'prefer' is unnecessary and incorrect here. The correct phrase is 'concentrate better' to indicate improved focus.

× No, I didn't go to the library when I was a kid because they because there wasn't one in my hometown.

✓ No, I didn't go to the library when I was a kid because there wasn't one in my hometown.

The phrase 'because they because' is redundant and incorrect. Removing the extra 'they because' clarifies the sentence and corrects the pronoun misuse.

× Chinese kids also do their dishes on their own.

✓ Chinese kids also do their chores on their own.

The phrase 'do their dishes' is incorrect because 'dishes' refers to objects, not tasks. The correct phrase is 'do their chores' to indicate household tasks. Alternatively, 'wash their dishes' would be correct if referring specifically to cleaning dishes.

× They also clean the school which makes them well-rounded individuals in future.

✓ They also clean the school, which makes them well-rounded individuals in the future.

The phrase 'in future' is missing the definite article 'the'. The correct phrase is 'in the future' to indicate a time period. Also, a comma is needed before 'which' to separate the clauses properly.