Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时语法错误较多，且表达不够自然。建议注意动词时态和单复数形式，避免重复表达。可以用更地道的表达方式描述和朋友一起去图书馆的活动。

例: Yes, I often go to the library, especially with my friends. We enjoy sharing our favorite books and discussing the characters in them.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和词汇使用不当，如“reading book”应为“read books”，“new box”应为“new books”。建议加强基本语法和词汇的准确使用，表达要简洁明了。

例: I usually read books in the library. I like to find new books that interest me, especially fiction novels.

提案: 回答内容不够连贯，存在语法和表达错误。建议理清思路，使用正确的时态和句子结构，避免重复和无意义的词汇。

例: No, I didn't go to the library as a child because there were no libraries in my hometown, which is a small and poor area in central China.

提案: 回答中时态和主谓一致错误较多。建议注意时态一致和主谓一致，表达时更简洁流畅。可以用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: Yes, I think many Chinese children often go to the library because many public libraries have been built in the last ten years, giving them more opportunities to read a wide variety of books.

× I also like to go to library with my friends and in the library we will sharing our love books and talking about the character in the books.

✓ I also like to go to the library with my friends and in the library we will share our love of books and talk about the characters in the books.

动词后面不应该用-ing形式，尤其是在将来时态中，应该用动词原形。这里的 'will sharing' 应改为 'will share'。另外，'love books' 应为 'love of books'，'character' 应为复数 'characters'。

× I usually reading book in the library at the same times.

✓ I usually read books in the library at the same time.

'usually' 后面应接动词原形，'reading' 应改为 'read'。'book' 应为复数 'books'，'at the same times' 应为 'at the same time'。

× I also like to find the new box for my interest and I also like the fictions books of the library.

✓ I also like to find new books for my interest and I also like the fiction books in the library.

'the new box' 应为 'new books'，'box' 是错误单词，应为 'books'。'fictions books' 应为 'fiction books'，'of the library' 应为 'in the library'。

× No, I didn't because when I was a kid there was no library around our country.

✓ No, I didn't because when I was a kid there were no libraries around our country.

'there was' 用于单数，'library' 应为复数 'libraries'，所以应使用 'there were'。

× It was very poor when I was a child and there has a there had a library when I was in me.

✓ It was very poor when I was a child and there was no library where I lived.

句子结构混乱，'there has a there had a library when I was in me' 不通顺，应改为 'there was no library where I lived'。

× Yes, I think so, because during the last 10 years there are lot of public libraries was built, their children in China has a lot of chances to go to the library and there are a lot of books they can choose to read.

✓ Yes, I think so, because during the last 10 years a lot of public libraries have been built, and children in China have a lot of chances to go to the library and there are a lot of books they can choose to read.

'there are lot' 应为 'a lot'，'libraries was built' 应为 'libraries have been built'，'their children' 应为 'children'，'has a lot of chances' 应为 'have a lot of chances'。