Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答語法不正確，句子結構混亂，令意思難以理解。建議你用簡單清晰的句子直接回答問題，例如說明你去圖書館的頻率及原因。

例: I don't go to the library very often because it is usually crowded. However, I try to visit it when I need a quiet place to study.

提案: 你的回答缺乏清晰的主題句和連貫的細節，語法錯誤較多。建議你先直接回答問題，再用連接詞補充具體活動。

例: I usually study in the library. For example, during exams, I spend time reviewing materials and doing practice exercises there.

提案: 你的回答不完整且語法錯誤嚴重，難以理解。建議你用完整句子描述你小時候去圖書館的經驗，並提供具體細節。

例: Yes, when I was in secondary school, I often went to the library to do homework and read books assigned by my teachers.

提案: 你的回答語句不通順，內容不清晰。建議你先表達自己的看法，再用具體原因或例子支持你的觀點。

例: I think many Chinese kids go to the library, especially during exam periods, because they want to study hard and get good grades.

× I'm not often coached by everybody because of everyday.

✓ I don't often go to the library every day.

The original sentence misuses 'coached' and 'everyday'. The student likely meant to say they don't often go to the library daily. 'Coached' is incorrect here; 'go' is appropriate. 'Everyday' should be 'every day' as two words to indicate frequency.

× Exempt, there are a lot of people and I try to go to the library to learning.

✓ Except, there are a lot of people, and I try to go to the library to learn.

The word 'Exempt' is incorrect; the correct word is 'Except' to indicate an exception. Also, 'to learning' should be 'to learn' because after 'to' we use the base form of the verb.

× I'm usually doing in libraries.

✓ I usually study in the library.

The original sentence lacks an object and uses 'doing' incorrectly. 'Doing' needs an object (e.g., 'doing homework'). 'Study' is a better verb here, and 'library' should be singular with the definite article 'the'.

× During the exams I will go to library to learn exam products or doing exercise in library because of this.

✓ During exams, I go to the library to study exam materials or do exercises because of this.

'To library' should be 'to the library' with the definite article. 'Learn exam products' is incorrect; 'study exam materials' is better. 'Doing exercise' should be 'do exercises'. Also, 'because of this' is vague but kept as is.

× Yes, bits of a my secondary school I have the homework about the reading book and pay the. Keep mine.

✓ Yes, when I was in secondary school, I had homework about reading books and kept them.

The original sentence is unclear and grammatically incorrect. 'Bits of a my secondary school' is incorrect; it should be 'when I was in secondary school'. 'Homework about the reading book' should be 'homework about reading books'. 'Pay the. Keep mine.' is unclear; likely meant 'kept them' referring to books or homework.

× I think Chinese kids often go to the library with Chinese kids very hot in their exams, they won't get a high mark and so that and in Hong Kong, their home and no large.

✓ I think Chinese kids often go to the library. If Chinese kids do not study hard for their exams, they won't get high marks. Also, in Hong Kong, their homes are small.

The original sentence is confusing and has pronoun misuse. 'With Chinese kids very hot in their exams' is unclear; likely meant 'if Chinese kids do not study hard'. 'So that and in Hong Kong, their home and no large' is unclear; corrected to 'in Hong Kong, their homes are small'. Pronouns and sentence structure needed correction for clarity.