Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer needs to be more natural and clear. Avoid repetition and incorrect word usage like 'Peaches' which seems out of context. Try to directly state why you go to the library and use correct vocabulary.

例: Yes, I often go to the library because it is a quiet place where I can focus and learn new things.

提案: Improve your grammar and sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid redundancy. Also, clarify your activities with correct verb forms.

例: Usually, I read books and sometimes listen to music while I am in the library.

提案: Focus on correct verb tenses and avoid repetition. Use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

例: Yes, I used to go to the library with my mom when I was a kid because I enjoyed reading storybooks.

提案: Work on sentence structure and grammar. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and provide more specific reasons.

例: Yes, Chinese kids often go to the library because it is a peaceful place where they can read books and improve their knowledge.

× Yes, I often go to library because their library is a place where I can I can get some, I can get more Peaches.

✓ Yes, I often go to the library because their library is a place where I can get some, I can get more Peaches.

In English, when referring to a specific place like 'library', the definite article 'the' is required before the noun. Saying 'go to library' is incorrect; it should be 'go to the library'.

× Yes, I often go to library because their library is a place where I can I can get some, I can get more Peaches.

✓ Yes, I often go to the library because the library is a place where I can get some, I can get more peace.

The pronoun 'their' is incorrect here because it is unclear who 'their' refers to. It is better to use 'the library' to specify the place. Also, 'Peaches' seems to be a mishearing or typo; likely the intended word is 'peace'.

× I usually do. I usually reading books and listening some songs in library.

✓ I usually read books and listen to some songs in the library.

The sentence has incorrect verb forms and missing prepositions. 'I usually reading' should be 'I usually read' (base form after 'usually'). 'Listening some songs' should be 'listen to some songs' because 'listen' requires the preposition 'to'. Also, 'in library' needs the definite article 'the'.

× Yes, I go to the library. When I were a kid, I I used to go there with my mom.

✓ Yes, I went to the library. When I was a kid, I used to go there with my mom.

The verb 'go' should be in past tense 'went' to match the past time frame. 'When I were a kid' is incorrect; the correct form is 'When I was a kid' because 'I' takes 'was' in past tense.

× Yes, obviously Chinese kids often to go the library because library is a place where people get more peace, people reading books and novels.

✓ Yes, obviously Chinese kids often go to the library because the library is a place where people get more peace, people read books and novels.

The phrase 'often to go the library' is incorrect; it should be 'often go to the library'. Also, 'library is a place' needs the definite article 'the' before 'library'. Additionally, 'people reading books' should be 'people read books' to maintain correct verb form.