Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn nên tự nhiên hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như thiếu mạo từ và số nhiều. Bạn nên nói rõ tần suất và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh hơn.

例: Yes, I usually go to the library about four days a week because I find it a quiet place to study.

提案: Bạn nên tránh lặp từ và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và sắp xếp câu hợp lý.

例: When I go to the library, I usually read books and study with my friends or my brother because it is very quiet there.

提案: Bạn cần sử dụng thì quá khứ đúng và tránh lặp từ. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp và thêm chi tiết cụ thể hơn.

例: When I was a kid, I didn't go to the library, but I often went to the bookshop with my parents to buy books.

提案: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp số nhiều và cấu trúc câu. Hãy trả lời rõ ràng hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như thiếu mạo từ và chia động từ sai.

例: I'm not sure about Chinese kids, but in my experience, Vietnamese children often go to the library regularly because it provides a quiet and private environment for studying.

× I think I go to library 4 day a week.

✓ I think I go to the library 4 days a week.

The noun 'library' requires the definite article 'the' here, and 'day' should be plural 'days' because it refers to multiple days per week.

× I already go to the library, I do read a book and I go to study with my friend or my brother and I think it's so quiet.

✓ I already go to the library, I read books and I study with my friend or my brother and I think it's very quiet.

The phrase 'I do read a book' is awkward; simple present 'I read books' is more natural. Also, 'go to study' is incorrect; 'study' alone is sufficient. 'So quiet' should be 'very quiet' for proper adverb use.

× Umm, when I was a kid, I don't go to the library.

✓ Umm, when I was a kid, I didn't go to the library.

The sentence refers to a past time, so the verb should be in the past tense 'didn't go' instead of present tense 'don't go'.

× I usually go to the book shop every day with my parents.

✓ I usually went to the book shop every day with my parents.

Since the sentence refers to past time ('when I was a kid'), the verb should be past tense 'went'. The plural 'parents' is correct.

× I think library are popular place for students in part country because they provide a private environment.

✓ I think libraries are popular places for students in part of the country because they provide a private environment.

'Library' should be plural 'libraries' to match 'are'. 'Place' should be plural 'places' to agree with 'libraries'. Also, 'part country' should be 'part of the country' for correct prepositional phrase.