Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答が不自然で文法的な誤りが多いです。質問に対して直接的に答え、理由を明確に述べる練習をしましょう。また、冗長な表現を避け、簡潔に答えることが重要です。

例: I sometimes go to the library, but I don't enjoy reading books there, so I usually prefer other places to read.

提案: 図書館での行動についての答えが不自然で、内容も正確ではありません。図書館では通常本を借りる場所なので、その点を踏まえて答えましょう。また、具体的な例を挙げて説明すると良いです。

例: Usually, I borrow manga or comics like Naruto and One Piece from the library to read at home.

提案: 文法の誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。過去形の使い方や単数・複数の一致に注意し、簡潔で明確な文章を心がけましょう。

例: I often went to my school library when I was a kid. It was very big and had many manga and comics, so I enjoyed reading them there.

提案: 質問に対して明確な答えがなく、内容も不明瞭です。知らない場合はその旨を伝えつつ、推測や理由を簡潔に述べる練習をしましょう。

例: I'm not sure, but I think Chinese kids might spend more time learning from their family or elders rather than going to the library.

× I go to library sometimes, so I don't like leading reading books, so I don't wanna go library.

✓ I go to the library sometimes, so I don't like reading books, so I don't wanna go to the library.

'Library' is a countable noun and requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place. Also, 'leading reading books' is incorrect; it should be 'reading books'. Additionally, 'go library' should be 'go to the library' because 'go' requires the preposition 'to' before a place.

× I buy the books, some such as manga or comics, Naruto and One Piece.

✓ I buy books, some such as manga or comics, like Naruto and One Piece.

'Books' is a plural countable noun and does not need the definite article 'the' when speaking generally. Also, adding 'like' before examples clarifies the sentence.

× I often went to the library in my school.

✓ I often went to the library at my school.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect here; 'at' is used to indicate a location such as a school. The past tense 'went' is correct.

× My school have the very big library so it has a manga and comics.

✓ My school has a very big library, so it has manga and comics.

The subject 'My school' is singular, so the verb should be 'has' not 'have'. Also, 'a manga and comics' is incorrect; 'manga' is uncountable or plural, so no article is needed.

× So I went to go to late dot manga.

✓ So I went to read manga late.

The original sentence is unclear and contains errors. 'Went to go to late dot manga' is incorrect. The corrected sentence simplifies the meaning to 'I went to read manga late.' Also, 'to go to' is redundant.

× I don't know but Chinese kids, Chinese people have many knowledge so maybe they they go to the elderly or family.

✓ I don't know, but Chinese kids and Chinese people have a lot of knowledge, so maybe they go to the elderly or family.

The sentence has repeated 'they' and lacks conjunctions. 'Many knowledge' is incorrect; 'knowledge' is uncountable and should be 'a lot of knowledge'. Also, adding 'and' improves sentence structure.