Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and unnatural phrasing. Try to use complete sentences and avoid awkward expressions. Also, keep your answer concise and clear.

例: No, I don't often go to the library because I prefer studying in my own room where I feel more comfortable.

提案: Your answer has several grammar mistakes and unclear expressions. Use the correct tense and structure your sentences properly. Also, add linking words to make your answer coherent.

例: When I was a university student, I usually borrowed my favorite books from the library and spent time reading them.

提案: There are grammatical errors and unclear phrases in your answer. Use the correct past tense and improve sentence structure. Also, try to provide more specific details.

例: Actually, I didn't go to the library when I was a kid because I wasn't interested in reading books. However, my mother sometimes read me stories.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains grammar mistakes. Avoid vague words like 'endure' here and use more precise vocabulary. Also, explain your opinion with reasons or examples.

例: I think many Chinese kids often go to the library because it is a quiet place where they can focus on their studies.

× Honestly, I don't go to the library as an.

✓ Honestly, I don't go to the library at all.

The phrase 'as an' is incorrect here. The correct expression is 'at all' to indicate not going to the library. Also, 'the library' is correct because it refers to a specific place.

× I prefer my home rather than a library.

✓ I prefer my home rather than the library.

When comparing a specific place like 'my home' to 'the library', the definite article 'the' should be used before 'library' to specify it.

× When I were a student in university, I am usually borrowed various books that they were my favorite and I read them.

✓ When I was a student at university, I usually borrowed various books that were my favorites and I read them.

The verb 'were' should be 'was' to agree with the singular subject 'I'. 'Am' should be 'was' to maintain past tense consistency. 'Borrowed' is correct in past tense. 'They were my favorite' is incorrect; 'that were my favorites' is better. Also, 'at university' is the correct preposition.

× Actually I didn't go to the library when I were a kid and I didn't any interested in reading books, just my mother sometimes read me some stories.

✓ Actually, I didn't go to the library when I was a kid and I wasn't interested in reading books; only my mother sometimes read me some stories.

'Were' should be 'was' for singular subject 'I'. 'Didn't any interested' is incorrect; it should be 'wasn't interested'. Also, a semicolon or conjunction is needed to connect the two clauses properly.

× I think Chinese kids are very endure and definitely they have to go a library to study.

✓ I think Chinese kids are very hardworking and definitely they have to go to a library to study.

The word 'endure' is incorrectly used; 'hardworking' fits better. The phrase 'go a library' is missing the preposition 'to'. The correct phrase is 'go to a library'.