Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达不够自然，语法错误较多，且内容重复。建议用更自然的表达方式，避免重复，并且注意语法正确。

例: I don't often go to the library because I prefer using my phone or watching TV in my free time.

提案: 回答较简短，缺少连贯性和细节。建议用完整句子回答，并用连接词丰富内容。

例: In the library, I usually look for interesting books, especially love stories, because I enjoy reading about relationships.

提案: 语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议用正确的时态和句式，明确表达原因，并避免不相关的内容。

例: Yes, I used to go to the library as a child because I wanted to find books I enjoyed, such as interesting stories and love novels.

提案: 语法和表达不准确，句子不连贯。建议用更准确的语法表达观点，并用连接词使句子更流畅。

例: Yes, many Chinese children often visit libraries because education is very important to their parents, including mine.

× Actually I don't usually go to the library because I don't like study.

✓ Actually I don't usually go to the library because I don't like studying.

动词like后面应该接动名词形式studying，而不是动词原形study。

× I most like use mobile phone or watch TV.

✓ I mostly like to use my mobile phone or watch TV.

这里需要使用副词mostly修饰like，且mobile phone前需要加冠词my表示所有权。

× I will find interesting books or story books, love story books.

✓ I usually find interesting books or story books, especially love story books.

回答关于习惯性动作时应使用一般现在时，而不是将来时。

× I like went to library because I want to find some books I like, for example interesting book, love story book and matchbook because my match is not very good in my case.

✓ I liked going to the library because I wanted to find some books I liked, for example interesting books, love story books and comic books because my reading is not very good in my case.

过去时态中，like应改为liked，want改为wanted；went后面不接动词原形，应改为going。matchbook应为comic books，match用法错误。

× for example interesting book, love story book and matchbook

✓ for example interesting books, love story books and comic books

名词需要保持复数形式以表示多种书籍。

× because my match is not very good in my case.

✓ because my reading is not very good in my case.

这里的match用法错误，应使用reading表示阅读能力。

× My parents is very important my study.

✓ My parents think my study is very important.

parents是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式think；句子结构不完整，需补充谓语动词。