Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is understandable but can be improved by correcting grammar and making it more natural. For example, say "I go to the library more than once a week because I love reading books and learning new things." Also, avoid redundancy like "more books" and "things that I don't know."

例: Yes, I go to the library more than once a week because I love reading books and learning new things.

提案: Your answer needs clearer structure and grammar correction. Use linking words to connect ideas, for example: "I usually go to the library to find new genres of books and improve my knowledge. I read the index of the books there, and if I find them interesting, I borrow them."

例: I usually go to the library to find new genres of books and improve my knowledge. I read the index of the books there, and if I find them interesting, I borrow them.

提案: Your answer is good but needs grammatical corrections and better linking. For example: "Yes, I used to go to the library almost every day when I was a child because our school had a big library with many books of different genres. I enjoyed finding new books to read there."

例: Yes, I used to go to the library almost every day when I was a child because our school had a big library with many books of different genres. I enjoyed finding new books to read there.

提案: Your answer is honest but can be improved by adding a polite and natural phrase. For example: "I'm not sure about that since I'm not from China, but I imagine many kids there do visit libraries."

例: I'm not sure about that since I'm not from China, but I imagine many kids there do visit libraries.

× Yes, I go to library more than once in a week because I love to read more books and know things that I don't know.

✓ Yes, I go to the library more than once a week because I love to read more books and learn things that I don't know.

The noun 'library' requires the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific place known to both speaker and listener. Also, 'in a week' is better expressed as 'a week' without 'in'. Additionally, 'know things that I don't know' is redundant; 'learn things that I don't know' is clearer.

× Yes, I go to library more than once in a week because I love to read more books and know things that I don't know.

✓ Yes, I go to the library more than once a week because I love to read many books and learn things that I don't know.

Using 'more books' is less precise here; 'many books' is a better quantifier for countable nouns like 'books' when expressing quantity.

× I usually go to the library to find new genre of books and to improve my knowledge.

✓ I usually go to the library to find new genres of books and to improve my knowledge.

The phrase 'new genre of books' is incorrect because 'genre' is countable and should be pluralized as 'genres' when referring to multiple types. Also, 'new genres of books' is the correct expression.

× I read those books there the index and I if I find it interesting I get this book.

✓ I read those books there, check the index, and if I find them interesting, I get those books.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. It needs proper conjunctions and punctuation to connect ideas logically. Also, 'the index' should be preceded by a verb like 'check'. 'I get this book' should be plural to match 'books' and consistent pronouns.

× Our school had a big library which has a lot of books of different kind of genres and I got there find new books to read.

✓ Our school had a big library which had a lot of books of different kinds of genres, and I went there to find new books to read.

The sentence mixes past and present tense incorrectly. Since 'had' is past tense, 'has' should be 'had' to maintain tense consistency. Also, 'got there find' is incorrect; it should be 'went there to find'. 'Different kind of genres' should be 'different kinds of genres' for correct pluralization and preposition use.