Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了去图书馆的频率和原因，但语言不够自然，有语法错误，如“in the weekends”应为“on weekends”，“when I stay off”表达不清晰。建议使用更地道的表达，并注意语法。

例: Yes, I often go to the library on weekends because it provides a quiet environment without distractions, which helps me concentrate on my studies.

提案: 回答中有语法错误，如“I often distracted”应为“I am often distracted”。内容表达较为简单，建议增加连接词使句子更连贯，并丰富细节。

例: Usually, I focus on my studies and work in the library because I am often distracted at home by smartphone apps, online videos, and chatting with friends.

提案: 回答中存在语法和表达错误，如“I live in a school”应为“I lived near a school”，“Brought me to the library and that can calculate a habit of reading”表达不清晰。建议用更准确的句子表达过去的经历，并丰富细节。

例: Yes, I sometimes went to the library when I was a kid. I lived near a school, and my parents often took me there, which helped me develop a habit of reading. It was very valuable for me.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，如“depends the distance”应为“depends on the distance”，“in the working distance”表达不准确。建议使用正确的介词和表达方式，并丰富内容。

例: Well, I think it depends on the distance. If the library is within walking distance, children are more likely to go there. Otherwise, they tend to stay at home and do other forms of entertainment.

× Yes, I frequently go to the library in the weekends when I stay off 'cause library provides the environment without distraction and I can imagine myself in studies.

✓ Yes, I frequently go to the library on the weekends when I stay off because the library provides an environment without distractions and I can imagine myself studying.

“in the weekends”应改为“on the weekends”，因为表示特定时间点用介词“on”。“library provides the environment”应加冠词“the library provides an environment”，且“distraction”应为复数形式“distractions”，因为环境中有多种干扰。最后，“imagine myself in studies”表达不自然，应改为“imagine myself studying”。

× I often distracted by the smartphone apps on online videos and chat.

✓ I am often distracted by smartphone apps, online videos, and chat.

句子缺少be动词，正确结构为“am distracted”。“on online videos and chat”表达不准确，应改为“online videos and chat”。

× I live in a school and my parents often bring me to the library. Brought me to the library and that can calculate a habit of reading.

✓ I lived in a school and my parents often brought me to the library. They brought me to the library and that helped me develop a habit of reading.

描述过去的事情应使用过去时，“live”改为“lived”，“bring”改为“brought”。“Brought me to the library”缺少主语，应补充“they”。“can calculate a habit”表达错误，应改为“helped me develop a habit”。

× Well, I think it depends the distance.

✓ Well, I think it depends on the distance.

“depends”后应接介词“on”，表示依赖于某事。

× If in the working distance it's more convenient to go to the library and if they far from the library they tend to stay at home and do something entertainment.

✓ If it is within working distance, it's more convenient to go to the library, and if they are far from the library, they tend to stay at home and do some entertainment.

“If in the working distance”缺少主语，应补充“it is within working distance”。“if they far”缺少be动词，应为“if they are far”。“do something entertainment”表达不正确，应为“do some entertainment”。