Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và mạch lạc. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, tránh những phần không rõ nghĩa và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, đồng thời giới hạn câu trả lời trong 5 câu để tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

例: Yes, I often go to the library with my friend because I enjoy reading books there. It is a quiet place which helps me concentrate. We usually spend about two hours there every weekend.

提案: Bạn cần trả lời rõ ràng và đầy đủ hơn, tránh lặp lại và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh. Hãy thêm chi tiết cụ thể về hoạt động của bạn trong thư viện để câu trả lời sinh động hơn.

例: In the library, I usually read books and look for new ones related to my studies. I also like to use the library's resources to improve my knowledge.

提案: Bạn nên sử dụng thì quá khứ một cách chính xác và tránh lặp lại câu. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp và thêm chi tiết cụ thể để câu trả lời tự nhiên và mạch lạc hơn.

例: Yes, I often went to the library with my parents when I was a kid. I enjoyed reading storybooks there, which helped me develop a love for reading.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn không rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, tránh nói lạc đề và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, đồng thời cung cấp ý kiến hoặc thông tin cụ thể hơn.

例: I think many Chinese kids often go to the library because it is a good place to study and read books. However, I am Vietnamese, so I cannot say for sure.

× Yes I do. I often go to the library with my friend because it's half a something I want and. It's.

✓ Yes, I do. I often go to the library with my friend because it has some of the things I want.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'It's half a something I want and. It's.' is incomplete and does not convey a clear meaning. The correction clarifies the intended meaning by restructuring the sentence to 'it has some of the things I want.' This improves sentence coherence and grammatical correctness.

× In the library I read book and. Find some book. Find some book use used to my land.

✓ In the library, I read books and find some books to use for my studies.

The word 'book' should be plural 'books' because it refers to multiple items. Also, the phrase 'use used to my land' is unclear and likely a mistranslation or error; it is corrected to 'to use for my studies' to make sense in context.

× I often go to the library when I was a kid.

✓ I often went to the library when I was a kid.

The sentence mixes present tense 'go' with past time reference 'when I was a kid.' The verb should be in the past tense 'went' to agree with the past time frame.

× I often go to the library with my parents in the right way.

✓ I often went to the library with my parents in the right way.

Similar to the previous sentence, 'go' should be 'went' to match the past time frame. Also, 'in the right way' is unclear; however, since the instruction is to correct only grammar mistakes, it is left as is.

× I refer to book to.

✓ I refer to books.

The phrase 'refer to book to' is ungrammatical and unclear. The correction removes the redundant 'to' and pluralizes 'book' to 'books' to make a correct and meaningful phrase.

× Yes, I think, but I don't Chinese 'cause I'm a Vietnamese kiss and I often go to the library when I was a kid because.

✓ Yes, I think so, but I don't know about Chinese kids because I'm Vietnamese, and I often went to the library when I was a kid because...

The original sentence is fragmented and contains unclear phrases like 'I don't Chinese' and 'Vietnamese kiss.' These are corrected to 'I don't know about Chinese kids' and 'I'm Vietnamese.' Also, 'go' is changed to 'went' to match past tense. The sentence ends with 'because' which suggests incomplete thought, but correction is limited to grammar.

× I can break the storebook.

✓ I can borrow books from the bookstore.

'Break the storebook' is nonsensical. Likely intended meaning is 'borrow books from the bookstore' or 'borrow books from the library.' The correction replaces the phrase with a meaningful and grammatically correct one.