Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 文法と語彙の誤りを修正し、より自然で効果的な表現を使うことが重要です。例えば、「I visit library at twice a month」は「I visit the library twice a month」に直し、「I lead finance」は意味が不明瞭なので「I read books about finance」に変更しましょう。

例: Yes, I visit the library twice a month. I usually read books about financial planning and accounting because I am interested in improving my knowledge in these areas.

提案: 文法的に正しい文章にし、もう少し詳細を加えて答えを豊かにしましょう。例えば、「I usually study CPA exams in library」は「I usually study for the CPA exams in the library」に直し、なぜ図書館で勉強するのか理由を付け加えると良いです。

例: I usually study for the CPA exams in the library because it is a quiet place where I can concentrate without distractions.

提案: 文法と意味の明確化が必要です。例えば、「I saw them visited in the library」は不自然なので、「I rarely went to the library as a child because I was not interested in reading」に直しましょう。

例: Actually, I rarely went to the library when I was a kid because I was not very interested in reading at that time.

提案: 質問が理解できなかった場合でも、わからないことを伝えた後に推測や一般的な意見を述べる練習をしましょう。例えば、「I'm not sure, but I think some Chinese kids go to the library often」など。

例: I'm not sure about that, but I think many Chinese kids do go to the library regularly to study or read books.

× Yes, I visit library at twice a month and I lead finance.

✓ Yes, I visit the library twice a month and I read finance books.

The definite article 'the' is required before 'library' because it refers to a specific place. Also, 'at twice a month' is incorrect; it should be 'twice a month' without 'at'. Additionally, 'lead finance' is incorrect; likely the intended meaning is 'read finance books'.

× I lead books about financial planning and accounting.

✓ I read books about financial planning and accounting.

The verb 'lead' is incorrect in this context; the correct verb is 'read' when referring to books. This is a vocabulary error rather than a grammar problem, but correcting it improves clarity.

× I usually study CPA exams in library.

✓ I usually study for the CPA exams in the library.

The definite article 'the' is needed before 'library' because it refers to a specific place. Also, 'study CPA exams' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'study for the CPA exams'.

× Actually I saw them visited in the library and because I have no interested in reading.

✓ Actually, I saw them visiting the library, but I was not interested in reading.

The phrase 'saw them visited' is incorrect; the correct form is 'saw them visiting' or 'saw them visit'. Also, 'have no interested' is incorrect; it should be 'was not interested' to match past tense. The conjunction 'and because' is awkward; 'but' is more appropriate here.