Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn cần tránh lặp lại từ và sử dụng ngữ pháp chính xác hơn. Ví dụ, bạn nên nói "books that are related to my study topic" thay vì "books that related to my study topic". Ngoài ra, câu trả lời có thể ngắn gọn và tự nhiên hơn.

例: Yes, I often go to the library to finish my assignments and read books related to my studies.

提案: Bạn nên tránh lặp lại ý giống câu trước và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh hơn. Ví dụ, câu "the quiet and peaceful environment that helps me concentrate better" nên là "the quiet and peaceful environment helps me concentrate better". Hơn nữa, bạn có thể dùng liên từ để câu mạch lạc hơn.

例: In the library, I usually complete my assignments and read because the quiet and peaceful environment helps me concentrate better and avoid distractions, which is hard to find at home.

提案: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và không rõ nghĩa. Bạn nên dùng thì quá khứ cho hành động trong quá khứ, ví dụ "I didn't usually go to the library when I was a child because I wasn't interested in literature at that time."

例: No, I didn't usually go to the library when I was a child because I wasn't interested in literature back then.

提案: Câu trả lời không rõ ràng và có lỗi từ vựng ("kittens" thay vì "kids"). Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và dùng từ chính xác. Ví dụ: "In my local area, Chinese children don't often go to the library because it's far from China."

例: In my local area, Chinese children don't often go to the library because it's quite far from China.

× I usually go to the library to complete my assessments and read books that related to my study topic.

✓ I usually go to the library to complete my assessments and read books that are related to my study topic.

The phrase 'books that related to my study topic' is missing the verb 'are' to correctly form the relative clause. The correct form is 'books that are related to my study topic' because 'related' is a past participle used here as an adjective and needs the auxiliary verb 'are'.

× I find that the quiet and peaceful environment that helps me concentrate better and avoid distractions, which is difficult to achieve at home.

✓ I find that the quiet and peaceful environment helps me concentrate better and avoid distractions, which is difficult to achieve at home.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'that helps' after 'environment' but also includes an unnecessary 'that' before 'helps'. The correct sentence removes the extra 'that' to properly link the subject 'environment' with the verb 'helps'.

× Honestly, I don't usually go to the library when I was a child because at that time I don't you literature.

✓ Honestly, I didn't usually go to the library when I was a child because at that time I didn't like literature.

The sentence mixes present tense 'don't' with past time 'when I was a child'. The correct past tense forms 'didn't' should be used to match the past time reference. Also, 'I don't you literature' is incorrect; it should be 'I didn't like literature' to express past dislike.

× Well, I will. Chinese kittens do not go to the library in my local area because my place is quite far to China.

✓ Well, I will. Chinese kids do not go to the library in my local area because my place is quite far from China.

The word 'kittens' is incorrect when referring to children; the correct plural noun is 'kids'. Also, the preposition 'to' is incorrect after 'far'; it should be 'far from' to indicate distance.