Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is very short and informal. Try to give a complete sentence and add a reason or detail to make your answer more natural and effective. Avoid using casual words like 'Yeah' in formal tests.

例: Yes, I often go to the library because I enjoy reading and studying in a quiet environment.

提案: Your answer is understandable but a bit repetitive and slightly disorganized. Try to use linking words to make your answer more coherent and avoid repeating similar phrases. Also, use more precise vocabulary.

例: Usually, when I go to the library, I first browse the shelves to find an interesting book. Then, I find a quiet corner to sit and read it carefully.

提案: Your answer has grammatical errors and unclear expressions. Try to use correct grammar and clarify your ideas. Also, provide a clear reason to support your answer.

例: To be honest, I didn't go to the library much as a child because my parents didn't encourage me to read books regularly.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains a mistake ('kitties' instead of 'kids'). It's better to answer politely if you don't know, and try to give a general opinion or guess to show your speaking ability.

例: I'm not sure about that, but I think many Chinese kids do go to the library because reading is encouraged in schools.

× Dad didn't told me should read the book.

✓ Dad didn't tell me I should read the book.

The auxiliary 'did' requires the base form of the verb, so 'told' should be 'tell'. Also, 'should read the book' needs the subject 'I' for clarity.

× my parent is mom.

✓ my parents are mom and dad.

The word 'parent' is singular, but the context implies both mother and father, so 'parents' (plural) is correct. Also, 'is' should be 'are' to agree with the plural subject.

× I don't have any idea about China's kitties.

✓ I don't have any idea about Chinese kids.

'Kitties' refers to young cats, which is incorrect here. The intended word is 'kids' referring to children. Also, 'China's' should be 'Chinese' as the adjective form.