Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答は直接的で良いですが、「in the near house」は不自然な表現です。より自然な英語表現を使い、文を簡潔にまとめることが重要です。例えば、「near my house」や「nearby」などの表現を使いましょう。

例: Yes, I do. I regularly go to the library near my house.

提案: 回答が少し混乱しており、意味が伝わりにくいです。「I love to cry」は文脈に合っていません。文を整理し、理由を明確に述べ、適切な接続詞を使って論理的に繋げましょう。

例: I usually study in the library because I can concentrate better there than at home. Also, I enjoy the quiet environment.

提案: 過去形と現在形の使い分けが少し混乱しています。「I hate I hated」は誤りです。過去の習慣を話す際は過去形を使い、現在の習慣は現在形で表現しましょう。

例: I didn't go to the library when I was a child because I hated reading books. However, now I love reading and borrow books three or four times a week.

提案: 文法と語順に誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。「Chinese is a great studying society」という表現は不自然です。より明確で簡潔な表現を心がけ、接続詞を適切に使いましょう。

例: I think Chinese kids often go to the library because studying is very important in Chinese culture.

× I regularly go to the library in the near house.

✓ I regularly go to the library near my house.

The phrase 'in the near house' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'near' to indicate proximity, and 'my house' specifies possession. So, 'near my house' is the proper expression.

× I always do.

✓ I always do that.

The sentence 'I always do.' is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'that' clarifies the action being referred to, improving sentence structure.

× I always study in the library and because I can concentrate better than studying at home.

✓ I always study in the library because I can concentrate better than when studying at home.

The conjunction 'and because' is incorrect here. 'Because' alone is sufficient to show cause. Also, 'than studying at home' should be 'than when studying at home' for clarity.

× And I love to cry.

✓ And I love quietness.

The phrase 'I love to cry' is likely a mishearing or typo. Based on context, the student probably meant 'quiet' or 'quietness'. 'Cry' is unrelated here.

× I love quiet, quiet situation.

✓ I love quiet, quiet situations.

The word 'situation' should be plural 'situations' to match the context. Also, repeating 'quiet' is redundant; one 'quiet' is sufficient.

× I hate I hated reading books.

✓ I hated reading books.

The phrase 'I hate I hated' is incorrect. The past tense 'hated' alone is appropriate to describe past feelings.

× I borrow some books 3 or 4 times in a week.

✓ I borrow some books 3 or 4 times a week.

The phrase 'in a week' is less natural than 'a week' when expressing frequency. '3 or 4 times a week' is the correct expression.

× Maybe they go, they often go to the library.

✓ Maybe they often go to the library.

Repeating 'they' is unnecessary and incorrect. The sentence should be concise without repeated pronouns.

× I don't know the exactly, but Chinese is a great studying society has a great studying society, so they go they often go to the library to.

✓ I don't know exactly, but China has a great studying culture, so they often go to the library too.

The phrase 'the exactly' is incorrect; 'exactly' alone is correct. 'Chinese is a great studying society' is incorrect; 'China has a great studying culture' is better. Also, 'they go they often go' is repetitive. 'to' at the end is unnecessary; 'too' is correct.