Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is a bit long and repetitive. Try to be more concise and avoid repeating the same ideas. Also, use linking words to make your answer more coherent. For example, you can say, "Yes, I often go to the library because I enjoy reading in a quiet and peaceful environment, which helps me concentrate."

例: Yes, I often go to the library because I enjoy reading in a quiet and peaceful environment, which helps me concentrate and learn new things.

提案: Your answer is short and lacks linking words and specific details. Try to give a clear topic sentence and then add supporting details with linking words. For example, "I usually go to the library to read books. I often borrow books that interest me, such as novels and history books, and spend time reading them there."

例: I usually go to the library to read books. I often borrow books that interest me, such as novels and history books, and spend time reading them there.

提案: Your answer is relevant but has some grammatical errors and could be more fluent. Use linking words and correct verb forms. For example, "Yes, I remember going to the library with my father when I was a kid because he was a writer and loved to write. I often accompanied him to the library."

例: Yes, I remember going to the library with my father when I was a kid because he was a writer and loved to write. I often accompanied him to the library.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains hesitations and grammatical mistakes. Try to give a direct answer and support it with clear reasons or examples. For example, "I am not very sure, but from what I have seen in videos, many Chinese kids enjoy going to the library to read and study."

例: I am not very sure, but from what I have seen in videos, many Chinese kids enjoy going to the library to read and study.

× I love to go in a library in a peaceful place to read books as I don't like any noise pollution around me and I love reading anything and learning anything in a very quiet place.

✓ I love to go to a library in a peaceful place to read books as I don't like any noise pollution around me and I love reading anything and learning anything in a very quiet place.

The preposition 'in' is incorrectly used with 'go' here. The correct preposition to indicate movement towards a place is 'to'. So, 'go to a library' is correct. In Nepali, this is similar to using 'मा' (in) versus 'तर्फ' (towards).

× I love to go library and I often go there.

✓ I love to go to the library and I often go there.

The noun 'library' is countable and singular, so it requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place known to both speaker and listener. In Nepali, this is like specifying 'त्यो पुस्तकालय' (that library).

× As all people, I also go library to read books.

✓ Like all people, I also go to the library to read books.

The phrase 'As all people' is incorrect; 'Like all people' is appropriate to express similarity. Also, 'go library' should be 'go to the library' with the preposition 'to' and definite article 'the'. In Nepali, this is similar to using 'जस्तै' (like) and correct postpositions for places.

× I went library and collect many books according to my interest and I read there.

✓ I went to the library and collected many books according to my interest and I read there.

Again, 'library' needs the preposition 'to' and the definite article 'the'. Also, 'collect' should be in past tense 'collected' to match 'went'. In Nepali, verb tense and postpositions are important for clarity.

× I went library and collect many books according to my interest and I read there.

✓ I went to the library and collected many books according to my interest and I read there.

The verb 'collect' is in present tense but the sentence is about past events, so it should be 'collected'. In Nepali, verb forms change with time reference.

× I went to the library with my father as my father was also a writer.

✓ I went to the library with my father as my father was also a writer.

This sentence is correct; no correction needed.

× He loves to write a lot and he usually go to library and I also go with him.

✓ He loves to write a lot and he usually goes to the library and I also go with him.

The verb 'go' must agree with the third person singular subject 'he', so it should be 'goes'. Also, 'to library' needs 'to the library'. In Nepali, verb endings change according to the subject.

× He loves to write a lot and he usually go to library and I also go with him.

✓ He loves to write a lot and he usually goes to the library and I also go with him.

The phrase 'to library' is missing the definite article 'the'. It should be 'to the library'. In Nepali, specifying a particular place requires a determiner.

× I think well I I scroll I can see that many Chinese kids loves to go library and I have seen many videos of the kids.

✓ I think, well, I scroll and I can see that many Chinese kids love to go to the library and I have seen many videos of the kids.

'Go library' should be 'go to the library' with the preposition 'to' and definite article 'the'. Also, 'loves' should be 'love' to agree with plural 'kids'. In Nepali, verb agreement and postpositions are important for meaning.

× I think well I I scroll I can see that many Chinese kids loves to go library and I have seen many videos of the kids.

✓ I think, well, I scroll and I can see that many Chinese kids love to go to the library and I have seen many videos of the kids.

The verb 'loves' is incorrect for plural subject 'kids'; it should be 'love'. In Nepali, verb forms change with singular/plural subjects.