List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Javobni sodda va izchil tarzda qayta tuzing: aniq mavzu jumlasi ayting, keyin qisqacha sababni tushuntiring. Grammatik xatolar va noaniq soʻzlarni tuzating (masalan, “lease”, “ride”, “ice shopping” o‘rniga “list”, “write”, “what I need”). Maksimal 3-4 jumlada qoling.

例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list before I go to the store because it helps me remember what I need. I write the list on my phone so I can check items easily while I shop. This also prevents me from buying unnecessary things.

提案: Javobni toʻgʻri tuzish: boshlangʻich mavzu jumlasi bilan boshlang (masalan, “Yes, I do”). Keyin qanday qilib ro‘yxat yordam berishini aniq va tartibli bayon eting. Keraksiz takrorlardan qoching va grammatikani tuzating (masalan, “If I didn't eat as well” noaniq). 2–4 jumlada chiqing.

例: Yes, I always make a to-do list for work because it helps me prioritise tasks. I usually write down the tasks for the day and keep the list on my desk so I can tick off items as I finish them. This makes me more productive and prevents me from forgetting important tasks.

提案: Javobni sodda, mantiqiy va grammatik jihatdan toʻgʻri qilib yozing. Sababni aniq bering va ehtimoliy taqqoslash yoki natija bilan davom eting. Keraksiz murakkab tuzilmalarni ishlatmang. 2–3 jumlada yetarli.

例: I think some people dislike making lists because they feel too busy to write them down. As a result, they prefer to rely on memory or do things spontaneously. If they had more time, they might start using lists to stay organised.

提案: Javobni qisqa va aniq qiling: birinchi jumlada afzal ko‘rgan usulingizni ayting, keyin nima uchun ekanligini bering. Grammatik xatolarni tuzating va keraksiz so‘zlarni olib tashlang. 2–3 jumlada qoling.

例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is convenient and easy to edit. Also, I don't need to carry or worry about losing paper notes. My phone list is always with me, so I can check it while shopping.

× When I go to the shop firstly I take a lease and ride about what is ice shopping and because it's give me help to know about it.

✓ When I go to the shop, I first take a list and write about what I am buying because it helps me to remember it.

The sentence contains multiple issues: incorrect adverb placement ('firstly' -> 'first' and placed after comma), wrong word choice ('lease' should be 'list'; 'ride about' unclear -> 'write about'; 'ice' should be 'I am' or removed), incorrect verb forms ('it's give' -> 'it helps'), and awkward structure. Suggestion: use simple, correct word choices, place adverbs before the main verb or at the beginning ('first'), and use present simple for routines ('I take a list', 'it helps').

× Definitely is. Firstly, when I go to do my work, I take a list and write about what I do during the day and put it on my desk.

✓ Definitely. First, when I start my work, I make a list of what I will do during the day and put it on my desk.

The original has a fragment ('Definitely is') and awkward sequence. Use 'Definitely.' as a full response. Use consistent tense and clearer verbs: 'start my work' and 'make a list of what I will do' for planned tasks. Place adverb 'first' correctly. This improves clarity and grammar.

× If I didn't eat as well like this, I didn't my work very well.

✓ If I didn't plan like this, I wouldn't do my work very well.

The sentence mixes unrelated verbs and incorrect past forms. 'If I didn't eat' is wrong contextually; 'plan' fits meaning. Use conditional structure: past simple in 'if' clause and would + base verb in result clause ('I wouldn't do'). Suggest using conditional forms for hypothetical past-present effects.

× For this reason, firstly I write about it.

✓ For this reason, I write it down first.

The phrase 'write about it' is awkward for making a list; 'write it down' is idiomatic. 'Firstly' is unnecessary and should be 'first' or 'first,': simpler adverb placement improves flow.

× From my perspective, some people don't have enough time to make use of the list and for this reason they would didn't would like to do this.

✓ From my perspective, some people don't have enough time to use a list, and for this reason they wouldn't like to do it.

The sentence has double modal/negation ('would didn't would') and awkward phrase 'make use of the list'. Use simple negative modal 'wouldn't' and correct noun article 'a list'. Keep verb forms consistent.

× If they have enough time, they do like this.

✓ If they have enough time, they do this.

The phrase 'do like this' is unnatural; remove 'like' to mean they use lists. The verb 'do' is fine for plural subject 'they'. Use concise phrasing: 'they do this' or 'they make lists'.

× Most of the time I prefer making the leads on my phone because it's very convenient for me and when I do like this I didn't I don't have worry about a lot of my paper.

✓ Most of the time I prefer making lists on my phone because it's very convenient for me, and when I do this I don't have to worry about a lot of paper.

Multiple errors: 'leads' should be 'lists'; tense/confusion 'I didn't I don't' must be 'I don't'; missing 'have to' after 'don't'; 'about a lot of my paper' -> 'about a lot of paper'. Use present simple for habits and correct collocations ('worry about', 'have to').