List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够完整且表达不清晰，句子结构混乱，缺少连贯性。建议练习完整表达观点，避免断句和语法错误。

例: No, I usually don't make a list when I go shopping because I prefer to buy things spontaneously based on what I need at the moment.

提案: 回答不完整，句子未结束，缺少具体细节和连贯的逻辑。建议练习完整表达原因和效果，使用连接词。

例: Yes, I usually make a list when I am working because it helps me organize my tasks clearly and improves my productivity.

提案: 表达有语法错误，句子结构不完整，缺少连贯的连接词。建议加强语法练习，使用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: I'm not very sure, but maybe some people don't like making lists because they find it complicated. However, I believe making lists can help us stay organized.

提案: 回答中有重复和不连贯的句子，表达不够自然。建议练习连贯表达和避免重复。

例: I prefer to make a list on paper and hang it in a prominent place so that I can check it anytime easily.

× I prefer to. Beside it immediately.

✓ I prefer to buy it immediately.

句子结构不完整，'I prefer to.'后面缺少动词，导致句意不明。应补充完整动词短语，使句子完整。

× It really works because it helps my work more clearly and I can.

✓ It really works because it helps me work more clearly and efficiently.

原句中'helps my work more clearly'表达不自然，应使用'helps me work'来表示帮助我工作。'and I can.'句子不完整，缺少谓语，需补充完整。

× maybe people who don't like make list just because they feel it is complex, but I believe make a list can help us.

✓ maybe people who don't like making lists just because they feel it is complex, but I believe making a list can help us.

动词后应使用动名词形式'making'，且'list'应为复数'lists'，以符合语法规则。

× I prefer to make a list on paper and I will hang the paper in a place where is dominant.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper and I will hang the paper in a prominent place.

'where is dominant'表达不自然，应使用形容词'prominent'修饰名词'place'，使表达更准确。

× I do. In this way I can check the paper anytime.

✓ I do this. In this way, I can check the paper anytime.

'I do.'句子不完整，缺少宾语，需补充完整。添加逗号使句子更流畅。