List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is clear but could be more natural and detailed. Try to avoid redundancy and add a reason or benefit to enrich your response. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list on my phone because it helps me remember everything I need and saves time when I am at the store.

提案: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Try to form complete sentences and explain why you don't make lists for work. Adding linking words and details will improve coherence and content.

例: No, I don't make lists for my work because my tasks are simple and easy to remember, so I don't find it necessary.

提案: Your answer is brief and repetitive. Try to avoid repeating words and provide more specific reasons. Use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

例: I'm not sure, but I think some people avoid making lists because they find it time-consuming or believe it limits their flexibility.

提案: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to use correct grammar and more precise vocabulary. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas.

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is always with me, so I can easily check or add items whenever I forget something.

× No, my work doesn't require. A list to finish it.

✓ No, my work doesn't require a list to finish it.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks proper sentence structure. The phrase 'A list to finish it.' is a fragment and should be connected to the previous sentence to form a complete sentence. Combining them and removing the period after 'require' corrects the structure.

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because my phone always with me and if I forgetting thing I can remember it on my phone.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because my phone is always with me and if I forget something, I can remember it on my phone.

The phrase 'my phone always with me' is missing the verb 'is' to be grammatically correct. Also, 'if I forgetting thing' is incorrect; it should be 'if I forget something' because 'forgetting' is a gerund and not appropriate here, and 'thing' should be plural or replaced with 'something' for clarity.