List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to use correct verb forms and avoid redundancy. For example, say "I definitely make a list before I go shopping because it helps me find the things I need and manage my budget." Also, reduce filler words like "uh" to sound more natural.

例: I definitely make a list before I go shopping because it helps me find the things I need and manage my budget effectively.

提案: Focus on grammar and clarity. For example, say "As an architect, I need to stick to my work plan, so I make a list every day to ensure I achieve my targets. It makes my work easier throughout the day." Avoid filler words and check sentence structure.

例: As an architect, I need to stick to my work plan, so I make a list every day to ensure I achieve my targets. It makes my work easier throughout the day.

提案: Improve sentence structure and avoid repetition. For example, say "Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to work freely without following a strict plan." Also, reduce filler words and make your answer more concise.

例: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to work freely without following a strict plan.

提案: Use smoother phrasing and correct prepositions. For example, say "I prefer to make a list on my phone because I carry it everywhere, so I can easily access my checklist instead of carrying paper." Avoid filler words and awkward phrasing.

例: I prefer to make a list on my phone because I carry it everywhere, so I can easily access my checklist instead of carrying paper.

× Definitely, yes, I'm making a list before I go to shopping because it's make me easy to find the things which I need and I can even, uh, mark and I can even, uh, think about the budget which I have, I will spend before going.

✓ Definitely, yes, I make a list before I go shopping because it makes it easy for me to find the things which I need and I can even mark and think about the budget I have and will spend before going.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'I'm making' instead of the simple present 'I make' to describe a habitual action. Also, 'go to shopping' is incorrect; it should be 'go shopping' (verb + -ing form without 'to'). 'It's make me easy' should be 'it makes it easy' to agree with the singular subject and correct verb form. These corrections improve clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× Definitely as an architect I need to stay stick on my work plan, so I am making a list everyday they I make sure that I will achieve my targets at the end of the day and it really makes me, uh, easy to do my works all the day along.

✓ Definitely, as an architect, I need to stick to my work plan, so I make a list every day to make sure that I achieve my targets at the end of the day and it really makes it easy for me to do my work all day long.

The phrase 'stay stick on' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'stick to'. 'I am making a list everyday they' is unclear and should be 'I make a list every day to'. 'Makes me easy' should be 'makes it easy for me'. 'Works' should be singular 'work' when referring to tasks in general. 'All the day along' should be 'all day long'. These corrections fix verb forms, prepositions, and idiomatic expressions.

× I think they will feel like, uh, not to stick onto, uh, uh, some plan. They may don't like to stick onto a plan. They may be like to work there all day free and comfortable without, uh, sticking into a plan. So they may not like to.

✓ I think they feel like not sticking to some plan. They may not like to stick to a plan. They may prefer to work all day freely and comfortably without sticking to a plan. So they may not like to.

The original uses incorrect modal verb constructions such as 'may don't like' which should be 'may not like'. 'Feel like not to stick' should be 'feel like not sticking' (verb + -ing form). 'Stick onto' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'stick to'. 'Sticking into a plan' should be 'sticking to a plan'. 'May be like to' is incorrect; 'may prefer to' is better. These corrections improve modal verb usage and preposition accuracy.

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's very easy for me as I am uh, carrying my phone everywhere so I can easily access to the my phone and see the checklist rather than uh, having carrying a paper all over the area.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's very easy for me as I carry my phone everywhere, so I can easily access my phone and see the checklist rather than carrying paper all over the place.

The phrase 'access to the my phone' is incorrect; 'access' is a verb here and should not be followed by 'to'. 'Having carrying' is incorrect; it should be 'carrying'. 'All over the area' is better expressed as 'all over the place'. These corrections fix preposition misuse and improve sentence fluency.