List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và rõ ràng, nhưng cần chú ý ngữ pháp, ví dụ như "This help" nên là "This helps". Ngoài ra, bạn có thể sử dụng thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lặp từ như "buy" hai lần.

例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list before going to the supermarket on the weekend because it helps me buy everything efficiently and ensures I don't forget any items.

提案: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp, ví dụ "This help" nên là "This helps". Ngoài ra, tránh sử dụng từ ngữ không cần thiết như "umm" để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn. Bạn cũng nên dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: Yes, I make a schedule for the next day every night because it helps me complete tasks before the deadline and plan my day effectively.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên sắp xếp ý tưởng mạch lạc hơn, tránh dùng từ không cần thiết như "uh" hay "umm". Hãy sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và liên từ để làm rõ ý của bạn.

例: I think some people don't like making lists because life is unpredictable, and unexpected problems can make the list frustrating when things don't go as planned.

提案: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ, ví dụ "bring phone to everywhere" nên là "bring my phone everywhere". Câu trả lời có thể được cải thiện bằng cách sử dụng liên từ và từ vựng phù hợp hơn để câu trả lời tự nhiên và mạch lạc.

例: I prefer to make a list on my phone rather than on paper because I carry my phone everywhere, so I can check and update the list instantly whenever I need to.

× This help me buy everything effectively and not forget something that I had to buy.

✓ This helps me buy everything effectively and not forget something that I have to buy.

The subject 'This' is singular, so the verb should be 'helps' to agree in number. Also, 'had to buy' implies past necessity, but the context is about a habitual action, so 'have to buy' is more appropriate.

× This help me umm complete the task before the deadline and also plan my day effectively.

✓ This helps me umm complete the task before the deadline and also plan my day effectively.

The subject 'This' is singular, so the verb should be 'helps' to agree in number.

× there are some several problems that may happens and this is make the least being frustrating and umm, it's don't go as we expected.

✓ there are several problems that may happen and this makes the list frustrating and umm, it doesn't go as we expected.

'Some several' is redundant; 'several' alone is sufficient. 'May happens' is incorrect; modal verbs are followed by base verbs, so 'may happen' is correct. 'This is make' should be 'this makes' to agree with singular subject. 'It's don't go' should be 'it doesn't go' for correct negative form.

× I bring phone to everywhere and so that I can check the list instantly when I want to correct.

✓ I bring my phone everywhere so that I can check the list instantly when I want to make corrections.

The phrase 'bring phone to everywhere' is incorrect; 'bring my phone everywhere' is correct. Also, 'when I want to correct' is incomplete; it should be 'when I want to make corrections' for clarity.