List— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you make a list when you shop?
受験者
Yes, I make a list when I go to a shop because it helps me remember the things I need to get and make a mental note not to forget anything. So I would say I love preparing a note of what I would like to get.
試験官
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
受験者
Yes, I make a list for my work and it helps significantly. It makes my day easier, makes my work organized, it helps me set time achievable plans for my work. I would say really works.
試験官
Why don't some people like making lists?
受験者
I believe most people don't like making lists because it makes them feel limited. They feel like they are being narrowed down and caged. They can't fully express their self and go out of their limits when shopping.
試験官
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
受験者
Yes, I prefer making a list on my phone because I could easily lose the paper or I could get to the market and find out that I have misplaced the paper and then I would be left confused and stranded. But when I make.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
スコア: 75.0提案: Your answer is good but try to avoid redundancy and be more concise. Instead of repeating the idea of remembering, you can combine your points into one clear sentence. Also, use linking words to make your answer flow better.
例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember everything I need and prevents me from forgetting important items.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
スコア: 70.0提案: Your answer has good points but the sentences are a bit choppy and lack linking words. Try to connect your ideas smoothly and avoid repeating similar phrases. Also, be careful with grammar and sentence structure.
例: Yes, I make a list for my work, and it really helps me stay organized and manage my time effectively, which makes my day much easier.
Why don't some people like making lists?
スコア: 80.0提案: Your answer is clear and relevant but try to use more varied vocabulary and avoid repeating similar ideas. Also, watch your grammar, for example, 'their self' should be 'themselves'.
例: I think some people dislike making lists because they feel restricted and prefer the freedom to choose spontaneously without being confined by a fixed plan.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
スコア: 60.0提案: Your answer is incomplete and a bit repetitive. Try to finish your thoughts clearly and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to connect your ideas and make your answer more natural.
例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's convenient and I won't lose it like paper, which can easily get misplaced when I'm at the market.
文法
× They can't fully express their self and go out of their limits when shopping.
✓ They can't fully express themselves and go out of their limits when shopping.
The pronoun 'self' is incorrect here; the correct reflexive pronoun is 'themselves' to agree with the plural subject 'They'. Using 'themselves' properly reflects the plural subject and is grammatically correct.
× I would say really works.
✓ I would say it really works.
The original sentence lacks a subject 'it' which is necessary for clarity and grammatical correctness. Adding 'it' completes the sentence structure and makes the meaning clear.
× But when I make.
✓ But when I make a list, I prefer using my phone.
The sentence is incomplete and lacks an object and continuation. Completing the sentence provides clarity and proper sentence structure.
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