List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn cần sử dụng cấu trúc câu tự nhiên hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như "go shop" nên là "go shopping". Bạn cũng nên làm rõ hơn lợi ích của việc lập danh sách và tránh câu không rõ nghĩa như "It is not waste my time for another things." Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list, especially when I go with my family. This helps me save time and avoid buying unnecessary items.

提案: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh lặp từ và lỗi ngữ pháp. Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng hơn về cách bạn sử dụng danh sách để học tập và hiệu quả của nó. Sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: Although I am a student, I often make a study list to organize which subjects to focus on first. This method helps me study more effectively.

提案: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn. Hãy tránh nói "people very lazy like me" mà nên nói "some people are lazy, including myself". Ngoài ra, hãy mở rộng câu trả lời với lý do cụ thể và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc.

例: In my opinion, some people are lazy, including myself. Sometimes, when I am very tired in the evening, I don't feel like making a list for the next day.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn khá rõ ràng nhưng cần sửa lỗi ngữ pháp như "I like I prefer make" nên là "I prefer to make". Ngoài ra, hãy tránh dùng từ không cần thiết như "Alright" và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, mạch lạc hơn với liên từ.

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is very convenient. Also, my phone can remind me of tasks if I forget them.

× I usually make a list when I go shop, especially when I go with my mother or my family.

✓ I usually make a list when I go shopping, especially when I go with my mother or my family.

The verb 'go' is followed by the '-ing' form of another verb to indicate an activity. Therefore, 'go shop' should be corrected to 'go shopping'.

× It is not waste my time for another things.

✓ It does not waste my time on other things.

The phrase 'It is not waste my time for another things' is incorrect. The correct structure is 'It does not waste my time on other things.' 'Waste' needs an auxiliary verb 'does' for negation, and the preposition 'on' is used with 'waste time'. Also, 'another things' should be 'other things' because 'another' is used with singular nouns.

× Like what subject I learn 1st and then I learn what the subject because if I don't make a list I don't know I need to study.

✓ Like which subject I learn first and then I learn the next subject because if I don't make a list I don't know what I need to study.

The sentence is unclear and needs restructuring. 'Learn 1st' should be 'learn first'. Also, 'what the subject' is incorrect; it should be 'the next subject' or 'which subject'. The phrase 'I don't know I need to study' should be 'I don't know what I need to study'.

× In my opinion, I think people very lazy like me.

✓ In my opinion, I think people are very lazy like me.

The sentence is missing the verb 'are' to link the subject 'people' and the adjective 'lazy'. Without 'are', the sentence is grammatically incorrect.

× Sometime in the evening I very tired and I don't want to make a list for the next day.

✓ Sometimes in the evening I am very tired and I don't want to make a list for the next day.

The adverb 'Sometime' should be 'Sometimes' to indicate frequency. Also, the verb 'am' is missing before 'very tired' to form the correct present tense.

× I like I prefer make a list on my phone because it's very convenient for me.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's very convenient for me.

The phrase 'I like I prefer make' is incorrect. It should be 'I prefer to make'. The verb 'prefer' is followed by the infinitive form 'to make'. Also, 'I like' is unnecessary here.

× Sometimes it can remind me to do something if I'm forgot.

✓ Sometimes it can remind me to do something if I forget.

The phrase 'if I'm forgot' is incorrect. The correct form is 'if I forget' because 'forget' is a present tense verb here, and 'I'm forgot' mixes present continuous with past participle incorrectly.