List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了基本意思，但有语法错误和表达不完整的问题，比如“make at least”不完整，建议注意句子完整性和语法准确性，同时可以增加一些具体细节使回答更丰富。

例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list before I go to the store because it helps me remember all the items I need. For example, last week I wrote down groceries and household supplies to avoid forgetting anything important.

提案: 回答不完整且语法错误明显，句子“this way I can in order to do my work”不通顺，建议练习完整表达原因和效果，使用连接词使句子连贯。

例: Yes, I often make a to-do list for my work because it helps me organize my tasks efficiently. This way, I can prioritize my work and complete everything on time.

提案: 回答较好，表达了原因且句子通顺，但可以使用更多连接词和具体例子来丰富内容，使表达更自然。

例: I think some people avoid making lists because they feel overwhelmed by seeing too many tasks at once. For instance, a long list might make them anxious about their workload.

提案: 回答简洁但略显单薄，建议增加具体原因和对比，使用连接词使表达更连贯自然。

例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's more convenient and I can easily edit or add items anytime. Compared to paper lists, digital ones are less likely to be lost.

× I usually make at least when I go shopping because it helps me remember everything I need.

✓ I usually make a list at least when I go shopping because it helps me remember everything I need.

句子中缺少了“a list”这个宾语，导致句子结构不完整。应补充完整宾语，使句子通顺。

× This way I can in order to do my work.

✓ This way I can do my work.

句子中“can”后面缺少动词，且“in order to”用法不当，导致句子不完整。应去掉“in order to”并补充动词，使句子完整。