List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Apni answer e kichu bar bar kotha bolchen ebong kichu sentence incomplete mone hocche. Apnar answer ke aro natural korte, prothome direct question er uttor din, tarpor supporting details ektu clear ebong logical vabe din. Apni linking words use korte paren jemon 'because', 'so', 'therefore' jate answer ta coherent hoy.

例: Yes, I always make a list before shopping because I have a short temper and tend to forget what I need to buy. Therefore, making a list helps me remember all the ingredients and where to find them.

提案: Apnar answer e kichu repetition ache ebong kichu sentence structure improve kora dorkar. Apni prothome direct uttor din, tarpor kichu specific details add korun. Linking words use korben jate answer ta logical hoy.

例: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me manage my daily routine effectively. For example, I list when to work and when to take breaks, which keeps me organized despite my short temper.

提案: Apnar answer e kichu grammar error ache ebong sentence gulo incomplete. Apni answer ke aro clear ebong complete sentence e bolun. Specific reasons din jeno answer ta bhalo lage. Linking words use korun jemon 'because', 'however' etc.

例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it boring and time-consuming. However, people with a short temper are often forced to make lists to stay organized and remember important tasks.

提案: Apnar answer bhalo, kintu kichu grammar mistake ache. Apni sentence gulo ke aro natural ebong fluent korte paren. Linking words use korben jate answer ta smooth hoy.

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I don't like carrying unnecessary items. Since my phone is always with me, I find it convenient to write and access my lists on the notepad app.

× I need to make list

✓ I need to make a list

The noun 'list' is countable and singular here, so it requires the indefinite article 'a' before it to be grammatically correct.

× there are so many ingredients that's why I can't remember who is to buy

✓ there are so many ingredients that's why I can't remember what to buy

The phrase 'who is to buy' is incorrect because 'ingredients' are things, not people. The correct phrase is 'what to buy' to refer to items.

× I need to list my daily routine like when I need to work, when I need to take break from the work

✓ I need to list my daily routine like when I need to work, when I need to take a break from work

The phrase 'take break' is missing the article 'a' before 'break' because 'break' is a countable noun here. Also, 'the work' is better as 'work' without 'the' in this context.

× Sometimes they are very lazy to make list because it's a kind of very boring things like

✓ Sometimes they are very lazy to make a list because it's a kind of very boring thing

'List' is singular and countable, so it needs the article 'a'. Also, 'things' should be singular 'thing' to agree with 'a kind of' which is singular.

× I make a list in my phone because I don't like to carry unnecessary things, so my phone is the only necessary things for me nowadays

✓ I make a list on my phone because I don't like to carry unnecessary things, so my phone is the only necessary thing for me nowadays

'Things' should be singular 'thing' to agree with 'only' which implies singular. Also, the preposition 'in' should be 'on' when referring to using a phone as a device.

× I make a list in my phone

✓ I make a list on my phone

The correct preposition to use with devices like 'phone' is 'on' rather than 'in' because we use 'on' to indicate using a device or platform.