List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to avoid repetition and redundancy in your answers. Use clear and concise sentences, and ensure your answer directly addresses the question. Also, use linking words to make your answer more coherent and natural.

例: I usually don't make a shopping list because I prefer window shopping. This way, I have more options to choose from rather than sticking to a fixed list.

提案: Focus on improving sentence structure and grammar for clarity. Use linking words like 'so' or 'therefore' to connect ideas smoothly. Also, try to be more specific about how making lists helps you at work.

例: Yes, I make a list at work because it helps me organize my tasks efficiently. By planning my day, I can manage my time better and ensure I complete all important activities.

提案: Avoid grammatical errors such as 'to making' and repeated words. Use clearer linking phrases like 'because' and 'also' to connect ideas. Provide more specific reasons or examples to support your answer.

例: Some people don't like making lists because they feel confident managing their time without one. Also, they may dislike being restricted by a fixed plan.

提案: Work on reducing repetition and improving sentence flow. Use linking words like 'because' and 'also' to connect your ideas naturally. Try to use more varied vocabulary to express convenience and preference.

例: I prefer making lists on my phone because I often lose paper lists. Also, since I always carry my phone, it's the most convenient way for me to keep track of tasks.

× I never ever make any list for for shopping whenever I want to do shopping.

✓ I never ever make any lists for shopping whenever I want to do shopping.

The word 'list' should be plural 'lists' because it refers to a general action of making multiple lists over time, not a single list.

× I never ever make any list for for shopping whenever I want to do shopping.

✓ I never ever make any lists when I go shopping.

The preposition 'for' is incorrectly repeated and 'for shopping' is less natural than 'when I go shopping' to express the time or occasion of making lists.

× So I prefer prefer to do the window shoppings because whenever I do the window shopping so that time I have more option than I have listed so I prefer to do window shopping.

✓ So I prefer to do window shopping because whenever I do window shopping at that time I have more options than when I have a list, so I prefer to do window shopping.

The word 'shoppings' is incorrect as 'shopping' is an uncountable noun here. Also, 'option' should be plural 'options' to match the meaning of multiple choices.

× Yes, I make a list at my workplace because it's it is very easiest and convenient way to me.

✓ Yes, I make a list at my workplace because it is the easiest and most convenient way for me.

The phrase 'way to me' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'for me'. Also, 'very easiest' is incorrect; 'easiest' is a superlative and does not need 'very'. Adding 'most' before 'convenient' is necessary for the superlative form.

× Whenever I start my work, I make a list what I will do all the day.

✓ Whenever I start my work, I make a list of what I will do all day.

The phrase 'make a list what' is incorrect; it should be 'make a list of what'. Also, 'all the day' is unnatural; 'all day' is the correct expression.

× I prefer to make a list on my mobile phone because if I make a list on the on the written paper, I always lose.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my mobile phone because if I make a list on written paper, I always lose it.

The phrase 'on the on the written paper' has a repeated preposition and article; it should be 'on written paper'. Also, 'lose' needs an object here, so adding 'it' clarifies the meaning.

× Apart from this, I always have a mobile phone with me, so it is the easiest and convenient way to me.

✓ Apart from this, I always have a mobile phone with me, so it is the easiest and most convenient way for me.

The phrase 'way to me' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'for me'. Also, 'easiest and convenient' should be 'easiest and most convenient' to correctly use superlative forms.