List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答有些重复和语法错误，建议简洁明了地表达观点，并使用正确的时态和句子结构。例如，可以直接说“Making a shopping list is very useful because it helps me remember what to buy.”

例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me remember everything I need and saves time when I shop.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清，建议直接回答问题并用连词连接句子，表达清楚自己的想法。

例: No, I don't usually make a list for my work, but I think it would be helpful, so I plan to try it next time.

提案: 回答中有重复和逻辑不清，建议使用连词使句子更连贯，并清晰表达观点。

例: Some people don't like making lists because they think it's a waste of time, especially when they are in a hurry. However, I believe making lists is very helpful.

提案: 回答较好，但有些重复，建议简洁表达并注意语法。

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always carry it with me, so it's very convenient.

× If you go to go shopping, you, if you made a list before, it's really convenient for you.

✓ If you go shopping, and if you make a list beforehand, it's really convenient for you.

The phrase 'go to go shopping' is redundant and incorrect; 'go shopping' is the correct form. Also, 'if you made a list before' should be in present tense 'if you make a list beforehand' to match the conditional context.

× I would like to make a list before Mike make a list before working because it's I think it's will be helpful.

✓ I would like to make a list before working because I think it will be helpful.

The phrase 'before Mike make a list before working' is confusing and incorrect. 'Mike' seems to be a mistake or misplaced. Also, 'it's I think it's will be helpful' is grammatically incorrect; it should be 'I think it will be helpful.' Modal verb 'will' is used correctly here but the sentence structure needs correction.

× I think people think making a list is is actual western and wasting their time 'cause if you're in a in a hurry you don't have enough time to make a list or something but contrast.

✓ I think people think making a list is actually a waste of time because if you're in a hurry, you don't have enough time to make a list.

The phrase 'is is actual western' is incorrect; it should be 'is actually a waste of time.' Also, 'but contrast' is incomplete and incorrect; it should be omitted or replaced with 'however' if continuing the sentence.

× but contrast. But by contrast, I think making a list will be really helpful though.

✓ However, I think making a list is really helpful though.

The phrase 'but contrast. But by contrast,' is redundant and incorrect. 'However' is a better conjunction to express contrast here.

× Actually, for me, I prefer to make list on my phone 'cause I'm always taking my phone whatever I go, anywhere.

✓ Actually, for me, I prefer to make a list on my phone because I always take my phone wherever I go.

The phrase 'make list on my phone' is missing the article 'a'. 'Taking my phone whatever I go, anywhere' is incorrect; it should be 'take my phone wherever I go.' The preposition 'wherever' is appropriate here.