List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is understandable but a bit unclear and redundant. Try to be more concise and clear by directly stating the purpose of making a list without confusing phrases like 'to pretend I forget something'. Also, avoid repeating ideas and keep your answer within 5 sentences.

例: Yes, I always make a list before shopping because it helps me remember everything I need to buy and prevents me from forgetting important items.

提案: Your answer is repetitive and lacks clarity. Try to avoid repeating phrases and use linking words to make your answer more coherent. Also, explain briefly how making a list helps you at work.

例: Yes, I make lists for my work because they help me organize my tasks and prioritize what I need to do next, which improves my productivity.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains many hesitations and repetitions. Try to express your opinion clearly and use linking words to connect your ideas logically. Also, provide specific reasons why some people might dislike making lists.

例: I think some people dislike making lists because they feel restricted by them and prefer to organize their tasks more freely without following a fixed plan.

提案: Your answer is clear and relevant but could be improved by using linking words and more precise vocabulary. Also, correct minor grammar mistakes such as 'set a alarm' to 'set an alarm'.

例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is more convenient; I can easily edit the list whenever I want and even set alarms to remind me of important tasks.

× I will make a list before I shop because I need to know what things I need to buy to pretend I forget something I need and it is helpful for me.

✓ I make a list before I shop because I need to know what things I need to buy to prevent forgetting something I need, and it is helpful for me.

The use of 'will' to express habitual actions is incorrect. For habitual actions, the simple present tense should be used. Also, 'pretend' is incorrect here; the correct word is 'prevent' to indicate avoiding forgetting something.

× Yes I do. I will make a list in my work. It does work because making a list can help me know what should I do next and then and then help me help me.

✓ Yes, I do. I make a list at my work. It does work because making a list can help me know what I should do next and then help me.

Again, 'will' is incorrectly used for habitual action; simple present tense is appropriate. Also, 'in my work' should be 'at my work' to indicate location. The sentence 'what should I do next' is incorrectly ordered; it should be 'what I should do next' in indirect questions. The repeated phrase 'and then help me help me' is redundant and should be simplified.

× In my opinion it may be they they don't want. It may because they don't want something restricted and they they can. Arrange their things properly and don't need lists.

✓ In my opinion, it may be that they don't want to. It may be because they don't want to feel restricted, and they can arrange their things properly and don't need lists.

The sentence has missing words and repeated words causing confusion. 'It may be they they don't want' is incomplete and should be 'it may be that they don't want to.' Also, 'It may because' is missing 'be.' The sentence fragments need to be connected properly for clarity.

× I prefer making a list in my phone because it is more convenient and I can change the list anytime I want and I can set a alarm.

✓ I prefer making a list on my phone because it is more convenient, and I can change the list anytime I want, and I can set an alarm.

The correct preposition for devices like phones is 'on' not 'in.' Also, 'a alarm' is incorrect; it should be 'an alarm' because 'alarm' starts with a vowel sound.