List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了观点，但语法和表达不够自然，且有些重复。建议简化句子结构，避免冗余，并使用更地道的表达方式。

例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me remember what I need. However, sometimes I forget items and have to go back to get them.

提案: 回答不够直接，句子结构混乱，表达不清晰。建议直接回答问题，并用连词连接观点，使表达更连贯。

例: I find making lists for work challenging because I struggle to follow them strictly, although I admit they can be effective for organizing tasks.

提案: 回答中出现了词汇错误（leagues应为lists），句子结构复杂且不够清晰。建议使用准确词汇，简洁表达原因，并用连接词使句子流畅。

例: Some people dislike making lists because they prefer to work flexibly and enjoy their time without strict schedules.

提案: 回答表达了观点，但有语法错误和重复。建议简化句子，避免重复，并使用更自然的表达。

例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's more convenient; I always have my phone with me, so I can check my list anytime.

× I think make a list is troublesome for me and I need to focus on the list.

✓ I think making a list is troublesome for me and I need to focus on the list.

这里“make a list”作为动名词短语，应该用动名词形式“making”来表示动作的概念，而不是动词原形。

× When I forgot something, I just return back and grab it.

✓ When I forget something, I just return back and grab it.

句子描述的是习惯性动作，应该用一般现在时“forget”，而不是过去时“forgot”。

× I know the people who get used to making lists because I think making lists is quite difficult for me and quite hard to obey the rules on the list, even though I think it's quite effective.

✓ I know people who are used to making lists because I think making lists is quite difficult for me and quite hard to obey the rules on the list, even though I think it's quite effective.

“the people”改为“people”更符合习惯表达，且“get used to”应改为被动语态“are used to”表示习惯。

× OK, funny question because I think the people who don't like making leagues because they want to do things more flexibly and they prefer to enjoy more time when they are working, they want to relax themselves more.

✓ OK, funny question because I think the people who don't like making lists do so because they want to do things more flexibly and they prefer to enjoy more time when they are working; they want to relax themselves more.

“making leagues”应为“making lists”，且句子结构不完整，需补充“do so”使句子完整。

× We can we always take our phones when we are going out or we are working, so I prefer to make this on my phone.

✓ We can always take our phones when we are going out or working, so I prefer to make lists on my phone.

句中“we can we always”重复，应去掉一个“we”；“make this”不明确，改为“make lists”更准确。