List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it could be improved by adding more specific details and using linking words to make it more coherent. Try to explain why making a list helps you or give an example.

例: Yes, I always make a list when I shop because I often forget items otherwise. For example, last week I bought everything I needed for a dinner party because I had a detailed list with me.

提案: Your answer addresses the question but contains a grammatical error ('it work' should be 'it works'). Also, adding linking words and more specific details would improve your response.

例: Yes, I make a list for my work, and it works well because it helps me remember all the essential tasks I need to complete each day.

提案: There is a grammatical mistake ('doesn't convenient' should be 'isn't convenient'). Also, your answer would be stronger with more explanation and linking words to clarify your point.

例: I think some people don't like making lists because it isn't convenient for their lifestyle, especially if they prefer to be spontaneous or find lists restrictive.

提案: Your answer is clear but could be improved by explaining why paper is more convenient and by using linking words to add detail.

例: I prefer to make a list on paper because it's much more convenient to me; for instance, I can quickly jot down items without worrying about battery life or technical issues.

× Yes, I make a list for my work and it work because it ensures I don't forget my essential items.

✓ Yes, I make a list for my work and it works because it ensures I don't forget my essential items.

The subject 'it' is singular, so the verb should be 'works' to agree in number. Using 'work' is incorrect because it is the base form and does not agree with the singular subject.

× I think that some people don't like making lists because it doesn't convenient to their lifestyle.

✓ I think that some people don't like making lists because it isn't convenient to their lifestyle.

The verb 'doesn't' should be followed by an adjective or an adverb. 'Convenient' is an adjective, so the correct form is 'isn't convenient' instead of 'doesn't convenient'. 'Doesn't' is used with verbs, not adjectives.